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    MRHUNGDO E-62 xin nop bai a!!!!
    MRHUNGDO E-62



    The graph over head show information on wages in “some country” out there over 10 years from 1993 to 2003. Growth rate in wages from 1993 to 2003 was unstable, it changed rapidly through years with 3 times of rising and 4 times of diving. The highest growth in wage is 6 percent occurs in 1998 and the lowest is 1 percent in 2002.
    Between 1993 and 1998, the growth rate rose well. In 1993 the growth is 2 percent then it rose fast to 4 percent in 1994. In 1995 and 1996 it stayed steady at about 3 percent. But in the next 2 years, it rose sharply to 4 percent in 1997 and reached it peck at 6 percent in 1998.
    What come up must come down. In 1999, the growth in wage dived deeply, backed to about 3 percent in just 1 year. It stayed at about 3 percent in 2000 then dived again to 2 percent in 2001, and continued to the trough at 1 percent in 2002. After 2 times of hard dropping, the growth rate recovered to 2 percent in 2003 at the end of the graph.
    From 1993 to 2003, over 10 years the growth rate in wages changed rapidly then backed to it position at 2 percent.
  2. kiriyu

    kiriyu Thành viên mới

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    Name: Nguyen Thi Thao Anh
    Ielts writing task 1
    Class: E61
    Group 3

    The line graph reveals information about how many commuters living in London use subway in each an-hour-period of a day from 6 am to 10 pm.
    As can be clearly seen from the graph, the trend is obviously
    Erratic, the figure varies from 100 to 400 people per hour. The most crowded time is around eight in the morning and six in the afternoon. At 6 am, the number of riders began at 100 then climb up rapidly and reach a peak of 400 at about half past eight. After that it drop dramatically to only 180 at 10 am. In the next period 10 am to 2 pm, it improves slightly to 300 but collapses again at 4 pm with less than 100 users.
    From 4 pm to 6 pm this figure recovers significantly and shoot up to nearly 400 passengers. However in the next two hours, it dips down one more time to under 150 people. In the last two hours - from 8 pm to 10 pm - the figure rises and falls and finally stops at around 130 people.
    *****m up, people in London use metro the most at 8 am and 6 pm while at 6 am and 4 pm the figure decline up to 4 times.
  3. red_star_7545

    red_star_7545 Thành viên gắn bó với ttvnol.com

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    Em Giang lớp E60 nộp bải

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    My name is Giang, i’m 22 years old. Now, I studying in England and want to find a suitable job in summer break. I have seen your advertising in an newspaper for young people to work at an activity centre for children. I’m very interested in the information that you give in the newspaper. So I would prefer apply for this job because i love children. I have four younger brothers and sisters therefor I have some experience in the care of children.
    In the requirements for the job, I noticed his suit for cooking. I also cook very well. When I was in my country, I work as the chef in my parent’s restaurant. In other hand, I can play many sport, in school, I take part in school swimming and basketball team. In ad***ion, I love tennis and play it very well. With the above, I think I’m available for this job.
    Don’t worry about my English, because I have studied in England for 2 years, not only that, I can speak German as well.
    Unfortunately, my course at college will finish in 15 June and I can’t work until that time. I hope you accept to me work in 16 June. Thank you so much!
    I’m looking forward to hearing you
    Sincerely
  4. Trang.Moon

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    Em Huyền Trang E61 nộp bài Witing task 1 - Group 3


    The line graph illustrates the number of people travels in London’s Underground station from 6a.m to 10p.m a day. It can be clearly seen from the graph that the quantity of passengers rises and falls erratically.
    There are two times the line graph come to the top, it mean that two durations the station in the most crowded with number skyrockets to 400 at 8o’clock and nearly 400 at half part 6 in the afternoon. In contrast, at 6a.m and 4p.m this station services only nearly 100 passengers.
    After the rush hours, the total of subway user drops dramatically from the highest level to slightly less than 200 at 10a.m and about 100 at 10p.m. At lunch time, the number of passenger slowly increases to 300 and starts to fall after 2p.m. At the last section of the day, it rises slightly to 175 and then closes in 140 in the latest train.
    *****m up, the line graph show the variety number of London’s subway users in period of time from the earliest to the latest train of the day
  5. mainguyen82

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    GROUP 3:
    The graph shows Underground Station Passenger Numbers in London.

    Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
    You should write at least 150 words.
    You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

    MAI VĂN NGUYỄN
    The graph shows the fluctuation in the number of people at a London Underground station according the course of a day.
    The result of the graph shows that, the busiest time of the day is in the morning. There is a sharp increase between 6:00 am and 8:00 am, from 100 people at 6 o’clock go up to 400 people using the station at 8 o’clock. However, the numbers drop quickly to less than 200 at 10 o’clock. Over the period 11am to 3pm the numbers fluctuates in increasing with plateau of not too 300 people using the station.
    On the other hand, in the afternoon the numbers decline seriously with less than 100 using the station at 4 pm. After this the numbers rise rapidly near 400 at 6pm. From 7pm, numbers fall significatly with only under 150 at 8pm, then by have a slight improve again at 9pm after that reduction and conclusion at 10pm.
    Overall, the graph shows that the numbers in London Understand station always fluctuation. The station is most crowded in the early morning and early evening periods.
  6. bicheuf

    bicheuf Thành viên mới

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    Chị iu ui cho em nộp bài với ah :D
    Bài của em- group 2:

    The line graph illustrates the growth of wages in “Somecountry” from year 1993 to year 2003.
    The growth begins at two percent in 1993, but it doesn’t stay there long, in one year from 1993 to 1994 it skyrockets two percent, it is one of second times soaring most. From year 1994 to 1996 it deteriorates gradually one percent per year, in 1996 it is approximate three percent. Further on, over the next three year, it really surges dramatically, comparing with year 1996, in 1998 it shoot up double and gets peak at six percent. However, after year 1998 the trends plummet nearly every year. Over the one year from 1998 to 1999 wages plunges significantly by about three percent (from six percent to under 3 percent). During the period from year 1999 to year 2002 it takes a nosedive gradually from three percent to one percent, only one slightly rising in 2000. In the year 2002, it reaches the lowest point of just one percent growth. Luckily it picks up in 2003 at just under two percent.
    Overall, the grow rate in wage in somecountry has revealed erratic changes through the ten years.
    ----------------------------- Tự động gộp bài viết ---------------------------
    Chị iu ui cho em nộp bài với ah :D
    Bài của em- group 2:

    The line graph illustrates the growth of wages in “Somecountry” from year 1993 to year 2003.
    The growth begins at two percent in 1993, but it doesn’t stay there long, in one year from 1993 to 1994 it skyrockets two percent, it is one of second times soaring most. From year 1994 to 1996 it deteriorates gradually one percent per year, in 1996 it is approximate three percent. Further on, over the next three year, it really surges dramatically, comparing with year 1996, in 1998 it shoot up double and gets peak at six percent. However, after year 1998 the trends plummet nearly every year. Over the one year from 1998 to 1999 wages plunges significantly by about three percent (from six percent to under 3 percent). During the period from year 1999 to year 2002 it takes a nosedive gradually from three percent to one percent, only one slightly rising in 2000. In the year 2002, it reaches the lowest point of just one percent growth. Luckily it picks up in 2003 at just under two percent.
    Overall, the grow rate in wage in somecountry has revealed erratic changes through the ten years.
    ----------------------------- Tự động gộp bài viết ---------------------------
    Trần Thị Hiền E61 Writing Task 1 – Graph 2
    The graph provides data on the percent increase in wages of some country during ten years from 1993 to 2003. In general, the first part of ten years, the salary had the trend to rise and the latter part was vice versa.
    As can be seen from the graph, for a period of first five years, the change of the growth rate in salary was positive. In detail, between 1993 and 1995, the salary climbed twice, from 2% to 4%. Besides, over the two years (1995, 1996), there was a slight reduction, compared with the year of 1994, fluctuating approximately from 3% to more than 3%. In ad***ion, between 1996 and 1998, the yearly rise in pay had a very large jump (just over 4%), especially, by the year 1998, wages reached a record point of 6% in growth.
    In contrast, during the latter five years, from the peak in 1998 to 2003, the increase in wages declined greatly. In 1999, the percentage of the salary rided went down gradually, only 3%. While in 2000, wages went up slowly in relation to 1999. And from 2001 to 2003, the rise in wages had a steady drop and reached the bottom of 1% in 2003.
    In summary, from the graph of growth rate in wages, it may be shown that the jump in salary of some country was not stable and it had a tendance to go down.
  7. bususu

    bususu Thành viên mới

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    em Thúy Mai nộp bài writing task 1 - group 1:

    The graph illustrates the information on people accessing to two new music places on the Internet for fifteen days, namely Music Choice and Pop Parade.
    As can be seen in this study that the overall trend show a fluctuation with a slight rise towards the end of the period.
    There were 40,000 people visited Music Choice on the first day whereas the number of people used Pop Parade was three times bigger. For the first nine days, the number of visits to Pop Parade smoothly decreased then bottomed out at 30,000 people on the seventh day. Meanwhile, the Music Choice line had a small growth at 60,000 people on day three before falling and reaching the bottom at 20,000 people on day seven.
    From the ninth day to the fifteenth day, the Pop Parade line had a dramatic fluctuation with a peak at 170,000 on the last day of the period. In contrast, there was a rapid drop in the number of visits to Music choice between day fourteen and day fifteen. This site was used by nearly 78,000 people on the fifteenth day.
    In conclusion, it can be said that the Pop Parade site is often the more popular choice compared with Music Choice site./.
  8. thuy_ed

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    Thông báo: TẤT CẢ CÁC LỚP NGHỈ LỄ THỨ 7 (31.03) & CHỦ NHẬT (01.04).

    RIÊNG THỨ 2 (02.04.2012), LỚP E59 ĐÃ THỐNG NHẤT NGHỈ THÊM. LỚP E62 VÀ E57 SẼ THẢO LUẬN HỌC HAY NGHỈ SAU [r2)]
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    THÔNG BÁO: Lớp E57 nghỉ học thứ 2 ngày 02.04.2012, riêng lớp E62 vì quá chăm chỉ nên cả lớp vẫn đồng lòng đi học =D>
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    THÔNG BÁO:
    CHIỀU NAY THỨ 2 (02.04.2012) lớp E62 nghỉ học nhé các tình yêu :"X

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