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  1. tranhuonghd89

    tranhuonghd89 Thành viên mới

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    Normal 0 false false false EN-US X-NONE X-NONE MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 /* Style Definitions */ table.MsoNormalTable {mso-style-name:"Table Normal"; mso-tstyle-rowband-size:0; mso-tstyle-colband-size:0; mso-style-noshow:yes; mso-style-priority:99; mso-style-qformat:yes; mso-style-parent:""; mso-padding-alt:0in 5.4pt 0in 5.4pt; mso-para-margin:0in; mso-para-margin-bottom:.0001pt; mso-pagination:widow-orphan; font-size:11.0pt; font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"; mso-ascii-font-family:Calibri; mso-ascii-theme-font:minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-theme-font:minor-fareast; mso-hansi-font-family:Calibri; mso-hansi-theme-font:minor-latin; mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-theme-font:minor-bidi;} [FONT=&quot]Em Hương E63 nộp bài writing task 1 group 3 ạh![/FONT]
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    [FONT=&quot]The line chart[/FONT][FONT=&quot] indicates the number of logins to the site chosen and pop music.[/FONT] [FONT=&quot]They[/FONT][FONT=&quot] [/FONT][FONT=&quot]skyrocket[/FONT][FONT=&quot] and [/FONT][FONT=&quot]deteriorate[/FONT][FONT=&quot] [/FONT][FONT=&quot]as a rule[/FONT][FONT=&quot] [/FONT][FONT=&quot]does not[/FONT][FONT=&quot] [/FONT][FONT=&quot]clearly[/FONT]. [FONT=&quot]There are the music choice and the pop parade. It can be easily seen from the graph that visitors to take advantage of self-selected music than pop music.[/FONT][FONT=&quot] For[/FONT][FONT=&quot] self-selected music, the first visitors was 120.000 respectively. The first[/FONT] few days, it almost doesn't change much. The number of visitors went down to 62000 on day5, then went up to 71000 on day 6 and continued to decline to 30000 at day 7. It began a sudden increase in the range from the 9th to the 11th day. It began to increase dramatically between day 9 until day 11 with the number of visitors from 40,000 to 131,000 times. Then abruptly [FONT=&quot]collapsed[/FONT][FONT=&quot] [/FONT][FONT=&quot]to[/FONT][FONT=&quot] [/FONT][FONT=&quot]80,000[/FONT][FONT=&quot] [/FONT][FONT=&quot]on day[/FONT][FONT=&quot] [/FONT][FONT=&quot]13[/FONT].Then[FONT=&quot] continued to increase rapidly with the highest peak of 150,000 visitors a day 15. But the number of[/FONT] visitors to the pop music starting at the first day of 40000. It reduced by half at day 2 and [FONT=&quot]pick up[/FONT][FONT=&quot] to[/FONT][FONT=&quot] 60,000 on day 3. It[/FONT] fluctuate continuously until day 11, the number of visitors is 25,000.It gradually [FONT=&quot]surge[/FONT][FONT=&quot]d to[/FONT][FONT=&quot] 120 000 respectively on day 12.Then[/FONT] a small decrease at day 13 and continued to increase again on day 14 and reached the highest number of hits here. But it is unfortunate that it is falling in on day 15. This ends my report here.>:D<[r24)]
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  2. thuyhuyen11

    thuyhuyen11 Thành viên mới

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    [FONT=&quot]Em Nguyễn Thúy Huyền - E63 nộp bài writing IELTS task 1 (đề 3)

    The line chart illustrates the amount of joins in music choice and pop parade on the website. The visitors to pop parade and music choice site soar and go down quite complicated and don’t comply with the rules. In the graph, the visitors to pop parade site are always higher than to music choice site in 15 days. In the 1st day, the visitors to pop parade site rise 3 times as fast as music choice site. The first 3 days, the visitors to pop parade remain constant, about 120,000 times while the visitors to music choice site have an upturn marlefly from 40,000 to 60,000 times. However, the visitor to pop parade site in the first 3 day is higher than to music choice. The following 3 days, the visitors to pop parade site plummet from 120,000 to 61,000 times and the visitors to music choice site also plummet from 60,000 to 22,000 times. From 5th day to 7th day, the visitor to music choice site have no change, about 25,000 times while the visitors to pop parade site still have a downturn significantly from 64,000 to 35,000 times. From 7th day to 9th day, both of them fall back to previous level. From 9th day to 11th day, the visitors to music choice site still fall back to previous level but the visitors to pop parade site skyrocket dramatically from 40,000 to 130,000 times. Contrary to the slump of pop parade site, the visitors to music choice site surge from 25,000 to 110,000 time in the following 3 days. From 13th day to 15th day, the visitors to pop parade site rocket significantly and are attained to top - 170,000 times. While, the visitors to music choice site take a nosedive. The end of 15 days, the visitors to two music sites in the 15th day move upward more than in the 1st day. This ends my report here.

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  3. quan_mof

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    Em Quân - E61 nộp bài Writing task 1 (group 2):
    The line graph describes the world population for the period from 1400 to 2000 and the pie charts describes the world population in the continent in 1900 and 2000.
    The line graph shows an upward trend of the world population, about 300 million in 1400 and it increased significantly on noticeably of dramatically to 6 billion in 2000 and it was a grow of 20 times over the 600 years. Especially, this increase was more dramatic after 1800 and only in 1700 to 1800 we see an obvious declined from about 1,2 billion to 0,8 bilion.<FONT face=[/IMG]The pie charts show the rate of the world population across continents. Rank the first is Asia, Asia accounted for the largest share, we can see that in both two time period, Asia accounted for 60% and then 54%, more than half of the world population. Rank the second is Europe, both the 2 continents saw the decline of the percentage of population because Europe declined by 10% from 24% to 14% while Asea decreased by 6% from 60% to 54% respectively in 1900 and 2000. However, on the other hand the percentage of the population in Africa and Latin America grew considerably from 4,5% to 13%, nearly triple, respectively from 3% to 8%. However, North America showed no changes because it remained as occupying 5% of the global population.
    In conclusion, most of the population rose in the developing countries, mainly in Africa and Latin America.
  4. BuaRick

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    Em Phong lớp E63 nộp bài Writing Task 1 - Group 1

  5. kimyen90

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    Em Yến nộp bài writing task 1 ạ

    Looking at the graph we can see that expen***ure for fast foots by three income groups in UK 1990. High income was spent the most money one week for fast foods , special hamburger with $42; fish & chips reach $17 and $19 about pizza. With average income, cost of fast foods in a week less than high income. They have over $30 by hamburger, $25 is fish & chips, at least pizza under $10. Low income make people to spend the less money for fast foods. Both hamburger and fish & chips around $15, and only $7 for pizza.
    The line chart below bar chart shows us that life of people more and more good, they send much money than to fast foods. Particular, dish that favourite everybody are hamburger and fish & chips; while pizza is used at least and considered as the most bad dish in 1990 at UK. My report end there!
  6. trungkienE63

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    Em Kien E63 nop bai IELTS task 1 group 3

    The line graph indicates about quantitative change of people who take interest in two new listen music site had just launched on the web.
    In three days first, the number of visitor are not much fluctuate. Amount of access person of Music Choice is between 40 and 60; that of Pop Parade is 120. In three days next, the trend in there is downward. Pop Parade have a lot of change. From 120, sum of clicks take a nosedive to 30. With Music Choice, the variation is not much; in the 6th day the volume of access is 30. The quantity listener of two websites stay there on roughly from 35 to 45 till 9th day. After that, astonishing variation occurred. Total of visitor of Pop Parade skyrocket to 150 at the 11th day, that of Music Choice is 120 at the 12th day. In the final period of 4 days of Pop Parade, deterioration appear at the 12th day remaining till 13th day; after that comeback to grow to 170 at the 15th day. The trend of the final days of Music Choice is downward. The visitor decline to 72 in the 15th day.
    Overall, the graph has shown striking change about total of visitor of two websites through the 15 days.
  7. BeMap91

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    Em , Phan Thị Ngọc Ánh E63...Nộp bài IELTs Task 1 group 1
    The charts show the number of Japaneses tourist traveling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of Japan's tourist market.
    According to the graph ,In 1985 ,the number of Japaneses tourist traveling abroad rose dramatically from 4,5 millions people to 10,5 millions people in 1990.Unfortunately, In 1991 in Japan the wheather was not good so the number of people was fewer than the number of people in 1990 .In the next 2 years , the number of people traveling increased lightly .In 1994,the numbers traveling abroad increased quickly by 13,5 millions.In the last year, the number of people traveling abroad reached by 15,7 millions.

    This graph shows the percentage coming to Australia in 1985 and 1994.During the first 4 years, Australia’s share of Japan’s tourist market rose dramatically from 2 to 4,9 percentage.In 1989 , the percentage down to 4,1 % .In 1990 the growth rates increased back to a previous level 4,9% and went up significantly in the next three years.In 1994 the rate dropt by 6 %.
  8. Chocolove_9X

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    Em Nguyễn Kiều Linh - E63 Nộp bài Ielts writing task 1 group 2
    Normal 0 false false false EN-US X-NONE X-NONE /* Style Definitions */ table.MsoNormalTable {mso-style-name:"Table Normal"; mso-tstyle-rowband-size:0; mso-tstyle-colband-size:0; mso-style-noshow:yes; mso-style-priority:99; mso-style-qformat:yes; mso-style-parent:""; mso-padding-alt:0in 5.4pt 0in 5.4pt; mso-para-margin-top:0in; mso-para-margin-right:0in; mso-para-margin-bottom:10.0pt; mso-para-margin-left:0in; line-height:115%; mso-pagination:widow-orphan; font-size:11.0pt; font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"; mso-ascii-font-family:Calibri; mso-ascii-theme-font:minor-latin; mso-hansi-font-family:Calibri; mso-hansi-theme-font:minor-latin;} [FONT=&quot]The table illustrates how Britons consumed weekly on fast food. The sales of fast food is related to income. People in high income group trended to purchase more than people in low income group. They spend the most over 80 pence per person per week and Hamburgers was the most favourite fast food. The total of hamburgers consumed 2 times more than that of fish and chips or that of pizza. Fish and chips was the most popular fast food with people in low income group. However, They just spent about 46 pence per person per week. People in average income group liked also hamburgers and they spent over 70 pence per person per week. [/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]The graph reveals in formantions about the number of various types of fast food cosumed in UK between 1970 and 1990. The amount of fast food was bought more and more and the type favourite of fast food was changed. In 1970, the most striking fast food was fish and chips. But the consumption of hamburgers and pizza had moved upward for 20 years. Special, the sales of hamburger rocketed from over 100g per person per week in 1970 to over 500g per person per week in 1990. The while the consumption of fish and chips had slumped that same times. [/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]This ends my repost here![/FONT]
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  9. minhphuong5191

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    Em Minh Phương lớp E63 nộp bài writing task 1 (group 1)

    The bar chart illustrates the amount of travelers who come from Japan that went to another country for traveling from 1985 to 1995. As an overall trend, it is clear that the number of Japanese tourist moved upward dramatically. Firstly in 1985, there were only 5 million Japanese tourists. There was a steady increase in the number of Japanese tourists during 1985 to 1990. And in 1990, it climbed to 11 million. From 1990 to 1995, it kept increasing and all of these figures were over 10 million. The number of Japanese travelers increased significantly up to 15 million.
    The line chart reveals information about the percentage of the amount of Japanese travelers who went to Australia from 1985 to 1994. Between 1985 and 1988, the number of Japanese tourists went up gradually. However, in 1989, there was a slight decline by 0.8 % in Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market. After that, the figure recovered and the maximum of that was up to over 6% in 1993. But in 1994, the number of Japanese decreased insignificant.
    In conclusion, the graphs show that the surge of Japanese tourist who travel overseas during the period 1985 to 1995.
  10. quynhtrang_dl47

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    Em Nguyễn Thị Quỳnh Trang E63 nộp bài writing task 1 Group 1

    The bar chart illustrates the number of outbound tourists of Japan from 1985 and 1995. According to the chart, the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad increased from 5 millions in 1985 to 11 millions in 1990. But in 1991, this number went down about 0.2 millions in comparison with 1990. After that it rose back and reached over 15 millions in 1995. Overall, this number increased quite equally during this period and it is predicted that it will go up in the next years.
    The line chart shows the percentages of Japanese coming to Australia from 1985 to 1994. The remarkable feature is the significant increasing during the period 1985 to 1988. There were 2% of Japanese tourists coming to Australia (approximate 100 thousands) in 1985, compared with 4.9% (approximate 416 thousands) in 1988. After that, it dropped slightly from 4.9% in 1988 to 4.1% in 1989. The rise came back in the period 1989 to 1993, but the rate was lower. And then, it decreased from 6.2% in 1993 to 6% in 1994. Generally speaking that Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market is dependent on the attraction of Australia tourism.

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