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Em Hồng Sơn - E63 nộp bài IELTS writing task 1 - group 3
The line graph gives us the information about number of visitors in the first fifteen days at two music website, Pop Parade and Music Choice.

At the site Pop Parade, in the first 3 days amount of visitors is quite high, around 120,000. The next day, quantity of visitors to this page began to decrease. And the 5th day, visitors only remain a half of the first days. The 6th day, numbers of visitors increase but not significantly. And reducing the number of visitors to this page has no signs of stopping when after a week stay of visitors to this page only about 30,000 people, a quarter of the first day. The next two days visitors have the figure of around 40,000 people. But surprisingly, in the next two days, visitors have skyrocket sharply. Visitors of the 11st day is up to about 150,000 people. Following the sudden, the next 2 days is a different surprise when the script of the early days was renewed, when number of visitors was quickly slumped to 80,000 milestone. In the second last day of the graph, the number of visitors has gone up the roof rapidly, and reached the highest number ever of about 170,000 people visiting this site.

In ad***ion, Music Choice website, the number of visitors in 4 days is pretty much fluctuation between the date with the most traffic is 60,000 and minimum of 20,000 people. In one week later, the number of visitors to this site have not changed much, and fluctuating around 30,000 people. And the 12nd day the amount of visitors has surged 3 times the number of hits the first day, at about 120,000. On the 13th the number of visitors has reduced but increased again on day 14. And to the last day, the number of visitors to this site fell to 70,000 people. By the above figures, we can see, quantity of visitors at the Pop Parade are higher than that of Music Choice. And the top number of visitors at the Pop Parade are 50,000 people more than that of Music Choice.

This ends my report here.

E63-Trương Khánh Vân-Group3-Writing task1. 
   The line graph information the diffirences on the web between two new music sites. 
   In the first day, Pop Parade site had 120,000 persons visited. While Music Choise site had only 40,000 persons viewed. 
  But in the third day, Music Choise site's visiter is more increase than that of Pop Parade's. 
  And the next day, both of site are visiter decreasing together. Detail: Pop Parade site's visiter is falling from 120,000 viewers to 100,000 viewers, and that of Music Choise's is slump to slump from 60,000 viewers to 20,000 viewers. Maybe, in this day, everybody hadn't saved times for these sites. 
   After that, those site still had not many visiters viewed. 
   After 9 days had maked two new sites music, both of site had gone up a lot viewers. Special, Pop Parade site is attracting visiter adjacent the first's day open this site. In this time, Pop Parade site is viewer than that of Music Choise's. 
   The end of 15 days, Pop Parade site had 170,000 persons visited that site. Whereas Music Choise site had only 75,000 persons viewed this site. Music Choise's visiter was not so view as a half of Pop Parade site. 
    This ends my report here. 
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E63 - Thu Hiền - group 1 - writting tast 1
The graph gives reveals information about number of Jananese tourists to different nation in the world. As an overall trend, it’s clear that the number of Japanese tourist moved upward dramatically. In 1985, there werer about five million Japanese tourist. But in 1995, the number of tourists surge in fifteen milion persons. So from 1985 to 1995, it increased ten million tourists. Whilest, the period of 1985 – 1990 was skyrocket. It increased seven million persons. One example is percent of japaneses visit Australasia between 1985 – 1994. The graph show, the percentage Japanese came to Australia rose dramatically from 2 to 6 percentage. It was big number. Athought, in 1989, there was a slight decline by 0.8 % in Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market. However, the percentage have just moved upward. In conclusion,the graph showe the trend of Australia’s share of Japan’s market was moved upward , between 1985- 1994 and the live of Japanese is becoming better.

E60- Lê Bảo Ngọc - group 3 - writing IELTS task 1 :
The graph below gives information on of Somecountry over a ten-year period. Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown.


The line graph illustrates the proportion of the growth rate in wages in some countries between 1993 and 2003.
It can be seen from the graph that at the beginning of ten-year period , in 1993 the percentage of the rate started with 2% and doubled made up with over 4% in 1994. In the next three years , from 1994 to 1997 , this number fluctuated from approximately 3% to 4%. However , one year later , that was a big surprise when the percentage of the rate in wages increased drastically to 6% from 1997 to 1999 and it reached a peak in 1999 at 6% in 10 years. For some reasons, the percentage declined dramatically in the next year 2000 the same as 1997 with 3%. Between 2000 and 2003 , there was a slow fall in the number of wages in 2002 to 1% and became the lowest percentage in those 10 years. After that, it went up slightly about 2% in 2003 and it was the end of the period.
*****m up , it may be concluded that there is no exactly answer for the reason why the percentage of the growth rate in wages increased or reduced sharply like that.

em Thanh Thao e60 nop bai (group 3- wrting task 1)
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Em Phong lớp E60 nộp bài writing task 1 group 3

The graph below illustrates the salaries of people in Somecountry for a decade ( from 1993 to 2003 ). In the graph, the horizontal axis performs "years" ( from 1993 to 2003 ) and the vertical axis performs the "percent growth in wages" with the limitation is 7%.
As can be seen, the trend of the graph is fluctuate. The percentage of growth in wages stood at 2% at the beginning of 1993. Over the subsequent years, the trend of percentage was upward. It had reached a new peak of 6% at the beginning of 1999. But from 1999 to the beginning of 2000, percent of growth in wages decreased rapidly (from 6% to 2,8%). To the beginning of 2001, the percentage had recovered weakly (from 2,8% to 3%) then it decreased gradually (from 3% to 1,2%) till the beginning of 2003. Finally, at the last part of 2003, percent of growth in wages increased piecemeal back to 2% like the entry.
In conlusion, the graph clearly shows that from 1993 to 2003 percent of growth in wages of people in Somecountry had mutated continuously but there was nothing changed overall.

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Em Minh Ngọc lớp E60 nộp bài writing task 1 group 2
The pie chart indicates the amount ech family spent on food at the restaurants a few investigation
In 1970 is about tim that people spend less money for to eat out restaurants,so the money is very small compared with 10% of people cook at home.The number of meals per year in fast food is as equal as sitdow restaurant meals,it's 20.The next year the family is often used the meals at restaurants.The percentage of food budget spent on restaurants in 1980 is bigger than is 1950 is 5%.In 1980 the fast food meals increase in 29 and sitdown meals is 33.In 2000 the percentage which people spend on restaurant meals and home cooking are a figure,it's 50%.Hoewer the number of fast food grew rapidly.Beside the number of sidown restaurant meals is slow developement
This ends my report here

Em Thiều Hoa lớp E60 nộp bài Writing task 1 Group 2:

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As can be seen from the pie chart, the percentage of food budget spent on restaurant meals increased. From 1970 to 1980, the budget food initially rose by only 5%. Family spent small amount on restaurant. However, there was a big jump in budget food between 1980 and 1990. It was went up doubly ( from 15% in 1980 to 35% in 1990). Especially, the percentage of food budget on restaurant meals was equal to the percentage of food budget home cooking and they occupied half of food budget in 2000.
The graph shows that the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurant and sit-down restaurant both increased. From 1970 to 1980, the fast food meals increased less than the sitdown restaurant meals. But, between 1980 and 1990, the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants grew up was more. There was a little change in number of meals in sitdown restaurant meals from 1990 to 2000. In contrast, fast food meals increased dramatically . The number of meals gained peak of 85 per annum whille the number of sitdown restaurant meals was nearby 50.
In conclusion, the average budget food family spent on restaurant meals and the fast food and sitdown restaurants meals increased.

Name: Thu Trang
Class: E66
Group: 3.
Writting topic: I was on the beach when my phone rang

Answer:

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After big examinations to the university, I decided to go somewhere peaceful for relaxing then I chose Nha Trang as the destination. Although everything was perfect with good weather, delicious tradtional local food and ofcource the sea was fantastic there, I still
felt so worry about my exams results .
One day I was on the beach, I closed my eyes tightly, I thought negative that I fail the examinations. I wondered whether I had answered exams questions correctly ? I was better check the solutions when examination finished but I did not do it because I was not confident with what I had done. I was afraid of the truth if I did them all wrong. Then I asked myself what should I do if I could not go to my dream university? Would I retake next year or chose the university which required much lower scores? And my parents, would they be upset a lot? All negative thought and questions came to me that made me headache. Suddenly, my mum called me saying that there was an envelop delivered from university. I guessed it was exams results , I was absolutely nervous but I was then calm down and told my mother to open the envelop to read the results, my face was sweaty ... My mom started crying, it made me worrier but she soon told me “ Sweetie, congratulation, you pass the exams”. I realised my mom cried of happiness, I then cried, too.
Since then, I was more confident, I talked to myself I had to optimistic, even if something bad happened, I need to calm down to solve the problems.