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  1. thuy_ed

    thuy_ed Thành viên rất tích cực

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    Mình ngừng nhận bài writing chữa cho học sinh nhé, tối nay mình sẽ trả lại cho các bạn, thanks mọi người [r2)]
  2. thuy_ed

    thuy_ed Thành viên rất tích cực

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    Từ 21.02.2011 lớp E46 áp dụng chế tài sau, sau khi đã thống nhất hum nay:
    - Phạt 50k thành viên ko làm bài tập hoặc nghỉ học ko lý do (nghỉ học "có quy luật" như Mr.H càng nặng nha [r37)])
    - Phạt 10k 1 bài tập ko hoàn thành
    - Đi học muộn 1 phút phạt 1k
    Số tiền phạt trên được chia đều cho các thành viên còn lại trong lớp đi học đầy đủ và làm đủ BT
    Trong trường hợp cả lớp vi phạm, số tiền phạt được nộp cho cô giáo, cuối khóa cả lớp đi đập phá, he he he... ;));));))
  3. thuhuyenbk

    thuhuyenbk Thành viên mới

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    In my opinion,everyone has got the different standards about their ideal lover.And to me,my ideal boy friend has to be faithful,aggressive and amusing person.

    Firstly,the faith is important and necessary to my boy friend.I think that a permanent love must be based on the faith that this person gives the other and vice versa.Like other girls,I really want him to only love and belong to me.I hope that he always thinks of me when he is happy or unhappy,which mean that I am the second woman in his life and his mother is the first.If he is unfaithful to my love,my heart will be broken.Of course,that thing makes our love get broken.

    Secondly,nowadays,the economy and society in Vietnam are changing quickly.In this situation,anyone should equip a lot of knowledge and be usually up to date daily information.There are many opportunities to look for a good job,which is created by the government.So everyone has to take full advantage of that things to make sure that their live become sufficient and well-off.On the other hand,if you only attend to work and ignore relationships beween people in society,you will meet with difficulties.So you should take part in activities in society,make many good friends and get in touch with a lot of kind people,that make you more mature in your life.To do all of these things,you really have to be self-motivated.This is reason why I would like to have an aggressive boy friend.

    Finally,my boy friend has to be amusing person.Some people said that every thing obeys the balance law.I am a thoughtful girl,so I wish he always made me smile and helped me to break out of the silent space.The life will be more interesting if there are much laughter and little tear.A humorous person need have rich imagination and the way of clever talking to the opponent,which is difficult to be able to do.

    Overall, there are many standards about ideal lover for everyone.For instance,he or she is handsome or beautiful,very rich,talented,manly or well-behaved,etc.For me,a faithful,aggressive and an amusing man is enough.
  4. Windriver

    Windriver Thành viên mới

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    ptminh0307 lớp Writing, buổi số 2
    1.1
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    It is immediately apparent from the charts that the percentage of food budget spent on restaurant meals gradually rose. There are only 10% of the food budget spent on restaurant in 1970, then it slightly increased to 15% in 1980. Over the next decade, this percentage has a sharp climb to 35% in 1990, and continually went up to 50% in 2000.
    With regard to the number of meals, fastfood and sitdown restaurant both stood at 20 meals in 1970. During the next ten years, families ate more marginally at sitdown restaurants than fastfood. However, it witnessed a dramatic growth of the number of fastfood meals to 50 meals in 1900 and nearly 90 meals in 2000, whereas sitdown restaurant meals moderately rose to 40 meals in 1990, after that it slowly increased to 50 in 2000.
    [FONT=&quot]*****m up, there is an upward trend in food budget spent on restaurant, and fastfood is more and more popular to average family.
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    [FONT=&quot]It is immediate apparent from the Figure 1 that in the period from March to May, only 1 female died by the flu, but 3months from June to August the flu killed 4females and 2 males.[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]In Figure 2, it can be seen that many female groups most at risk had new flu vaccine trail and 28% of the others had not. In case of those who took part in the trail, the greatest proportion is the aged of over 65 years old which occupy 35%, the second one is the groups of babies and children constituting 24%, and 13% were either hospitalised or receving other medical attention.[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]According to line graph in Figure 3, the number of flu cases of female and male had the same trend throughout the year, and the firgures of female were little higher. In terms of females who had flu vaccine, there were 1000 cases in April, increasing dramatically and reaching a peak at 3500 in June. After that, the number of female cases has a gradual decline to 2500 in September followed levelling out for the rest of the year.[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]This end my report here.[/FONT]
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    [FONT=&quot]It is immediately apparent from the table that the sale of lunch and dinner had the similar trend that higher on weekday then considerable shift on weeken. In the case of lunch sales, it fluctuated around $2500 during Monday to Friday with the highest sales on Wednesday at $2595. Weeken’s lunch sales had a sharp drop with $1550 on Sunday as the lowest point through this week. With regard to dinner sales which were at least 1000$ a day more than lunch sales, two of the most profitable day were on Tuesday ( $3850) and Thursday ($3800), and the peak of the week’s sales was $4350 on Friday. Like the lunch sales, the dinner sales went down on weeken, and also had the lowest sales on Sunday was only $2450.[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]*****m up, this restaurant had a steady sales in terms of both lunch and dinner on weekday when the time of bussiness work.[/FONT]
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    caynuathan Thành viên mới

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    chào mọi ng....
    mình là học viên mới lớp E48( vừa đăng ký xog)
    Mong mọi ng giúp đỡ nhiều ạ
  6. scarap87

    scarap87 Thành viên mới

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    Chị ơi, trước em có học lớp Basic rồi, giờ e muốn học lại cho nhớ để còn học IELTS nữa. Có j` chị gửi cho e nội dung khóa học của lớp E48 với ạ. Email của e: scarap87@yahoo.com. Thanks chị ^^
  7. baby.xtin

    baby.xtin Thành viên mới

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    Học tiếng Anh với cô Thùy là No.1 đấy, "geo căm" bạn vào ngôi nhà này [r32)]
  8. nqtrang184

    nqtrang184 Thành viên mới

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    Quỳnh Trang E39

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    Interest is to share all the happiness and sadness of life. I wish he would be my spirit prop whenever I meet difficulty.
    The ideal lover should be smart, talented. A smart men also promises a bright future, with social status and ability to earn more money. Not only that, the striving is also the attractiveness of men.

    The humor is which I want in my ideal lover. He can make me laugh when I upset by the jokes. The laughing always create a lot of exciting for a couple.
    He must also be faithful. It is a good quality. Because the faithfulness always make a girl trust.

    Finally, looking for an ideal lover is very difficult but I hope me and people will select an ideal lover for own.
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  9. beplac

    beplac Thành viên mới

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    E nộp bài writting số 1 nhé...



    Choosing a partner is difficult with each other person. With me, a good partner have three characters: trust, thoughtful , willingness to share
    From my point of view, he must be thoughtful. He knows what his partner likes or these little gestures will show that he were thinking about them. Besides sometime he take time to go out together such as: go to the cinema, go out with friends…

    Building trust up is very important in a relationship. When said that I believe you, means I have no doubt in my mind about your honesty, integrity and credibility. However trust help keep relationship forever. For instance when we have a misunderstanding if we don’t have trust, this relationship is easy to break.

    Finally I think that a good partner is willingness to share. He always listen to you and to your problem. Besides he share his opinion, work , family, life for you. Maybe I cheer his favorite team football up or he try a dish that I enjoy cooking

    There are many qualities that make good partner but this is three qualities will help I develop a deeper relationship with your partner.
  10. ductruonghua

    ductruonghua Thành viên mới

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    Truong E39.
    Em nop bai Writing so 1.
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    The first, a gentle girl is good behavior. The good manner plays an important part in maintaining peace and good will in my family and community. The people who has good manners does not hurt the feelings of others or cause them any inconvenience, and therefore she is on good terms with her friends, neighbours and also with others. She know that how to treat my family members well, so she will fit into my family. My relationships with family members will wosen if my partner is not suitable for them. Without support and encouragement from these ones, the young will be very difficult to live well.
    The second, an understanding girl knows and takes care of most domestic duties in my family.
    She will care for my family, my children and me because women have emotional powers and an ability to be caring that other people do not. She always wants to improve herself and understand the importance of family and of helping children to become the best they can be especially when they are tenagers and young adults.
    Finally, a sympathetic girl is people who share problems with me and other. I can share with her my broblem in word as well as life. She is a people who would understand, respect and listen to me when I am saying something. And she has sense of humour, because the fun makes atmosphere of family wonderful.
    The reason that I thinks these qualities are important for happy family.

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