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Em Hồ Mạnh Linh nộp 4 bài writing task 1

1.1)The table illustrates the proportion ò home schooled learners in Somecountry betwwen 1999 and 2004 . Taking a quick glance at the graph, it can be clearly seen that kindergarten accounted for the highest rate throughtout the period .
The six grades of students can be divided into 2 categories : upward trend and erratic trend . The former group consisted of kindergarten, grade 3-4 and grade 7-8 . Regarding 3-4, the figure gradually rose from 1.6% in 1999 to 1.9% in 2002 .Following this increase , it peaked at 2.2 at the end of the period. Comparing with grades 3-4 , the tendency for grades 7-8 was more dramatic. The rate remained constant at 1.6% in the first three years and then remarkably increased to 2.5 at the end of the period .
Another striking feature is that the figures for group 2 fluctuated marginally before climbing to the highest point in 2004 . As for grades 1-2, the rate of home schooled student declined steadily from 1.5% to 1.3% in 2001 before it recovered and hit the peak of 2.1% in 2004.In the case of grade 5-6, the proportion hovered around 1.6% and then rose sharply to 2.6% at the end of five year period.
It can be inferred from the graph that there were more and more students stay at home for education

1.2)The table indicates the percentages of different classes of extremely poor households in 1999 .taking a quick glance at the graph it can be clearly seen that there were totally 1837000 families living poverty,accounting for 11%
Regrading eight categories of families, they can be divided into three groups : sole people, couple family and the elderly .
The first group consisted of sole parent and single person . The figure for the former stood at 232000 families , representing 21% . That of the latter comprised 19% households , occupying 19%. In the case of the second group , it included couple, no children and couple with children families. The highest rate of this category is fore the latter type , standing at 12% .
Regarding the third group, there were 54000 single aged people living in poverty, making up 6% .The figure for aged couple stood at 48000 families , accounting for 4%
Comparing with the figures of two former groups , that for the third one is relatively small
1.3)The line graph illustrates the growth rate of income In SomeCountry from 1993 to 2003 . The vertical axis shows the percentages while the horizontal one indicates the years
Taking a quick glance at the graph , the overall trend was erratic . In 1993, the figure started at 2 per cent and then it rose gradually to 4 % in the next year . The growth rates in salaries decreased marginally to approximately 3% between 1994 and 1996 . Following this tendency , the gigure doubled , stading at the highest point of 6% . After reaching the peak in 1998 , the growth rate plummeted to just well under 3% in 2000. Afterwards, the percentage of income growth virtually remained constant in one year before hiting the trough of just 1 % in 2002.Subsequently, the figure recovered and climbed to 2% at the end of the period.
To conclude, during the 10 year period, the growth rate of wages in SomeCountry hovered around 1% and 6%
1.4)The diagram illustrates how a dosmetic central heating system functions in a house. Taking a quick glance at the graph , it takes cold water various steps to be in used as hot water .
At the first stage, cold water from external sources gets into the house by pipes and the it is filled in a storage tank . After being contained , cold water goes through an overflow pipe before being stored in another container . Next , it moves to the boiler and then it is heated by gas or oil . There is pump right next to the boiler to deliver heated water around the house . The central heating system consists of quite a few hot water radiators in many sections of the house . Finally , family members can enjoy hot water by using taps in bathroom or kitchen . The cold water is separately piped in another tubes and it may be heated if necessary .
It can be inferred from the graph that boiled water is piped around the house in a small tubes to increase the average temperature in the house in freezing days .
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2.2)Thanks to the advance of human civilization and steady growthof the economy , people’s living standards have been improved significantly in recent years . However , each person has his own approach to the term of happiness and it is quite difficult to determine the exact definition of “happiness” . From my own perspective, I will discover several factors that highly impact the personal opinions.
First and foremost, it goes without saying that people from different age groups do not entirely have the same attitude toward happiness . To illustrate this point, I would like to mention the case of my own family . It is commonly believed that the elderly considers respectation is the top criteria in achieving enjoyment .Howevwe , the youngsters like my brother and I think that money psychologically plays a vital role in our lives .Therfore, it can be inferred that in each separate stage of life, an individual has his own dream goal.
It is also important for people to realize that the characteristics strongly affect personal mind . The personalities are definitely influenced by surrounding environments and the way of being nurtured . A concrete example for this statement is the comparision between urban and rural citizens.The former group tends to think a magnificent car and individual status are their aims , whereas the latter one considers the strong ties between family members and cemented relationships are more essential
Last but not least , everyone should remember the effecs of education and occupation .As a proof , I would like to mention the situations of scientists and entrepreuners . A wise scholar seems target his goal as a well-known discovery or a practical invention . nonetheless a businessman virtually believe his increasing budget is the fulfillment of his dream.
Off all I have discussed above , I can finally conclude that there are many obstacles to define the term of happiness . It can be clearly senn that the pursuit of happiness depends on various factors . It is predicted that this heated and highly debatable discussion will undoubtedly interest the publicity in the future

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Em Truong Lop E39 nop bai writing 2

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Discribe a star that you admire​

I admire a star is Lionel Messi. Messi is a Argentine footballer who plays for club Barcelona. He is not very tall, strong and skillful with his legs. On the football ground, he always accomplish his task and scores goals for his team. Lionel Messi has scored 83 goals in his last 82 games for Barcelona. He is a big player who has all the qualities. He is in a great moment of his career and he is the best in the world now. In fact, my favourite sports is football, that is why I admire the sports star who are good at football.

Discribe the process to flirt with someone you fancy​

The first thing, you should know how to flirt using your eyes. You should make your eyes contact and smile with sincerity to her. You can repeat twice or thrice, if she smiles back at you, that is the good sign. Next, you have to make friend with her and make a short conversation to ask for her name as well as introduce yourself to her. Third, you try to be near her eventually in terms of proximity and you should listen with whole your heart when she speaks. All process, you should compliment on her clothes, eyes, smile or sense etc if you have any opportunity. Example, you can telling her if you love her new hairstyle, if the dress looks nice on her, and so on. After, you need open your heart to share happiness as well as sadness with her. Finally, you talk to her: “I Love You”.

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Paragraph 1 Describe a star that you admire.
As you know people say that movie stars are very beautiful. But in my opinion no one makes me notice until I know Nicole Kidman. The first time I saw her on a movie, I must think that : “ Wow, such an elegance woman”. Her beauty is really special. Her face is flawless, classical and so elegance. With a curly blonde hair it always make her fabulous and more attractive. Nicole is not only beautiful but also talented. She succedded in movie even in music and got many noble reward. As a result of all her efforts, she received her star on the famous Hollywood Walk of Fame. I admire her beauty, her acting, her voice and I will never stop looking for them. The more I know about her, the more I love her.

Pagragraph 2 Describe the process to flirt with someone you fancy.
Nowadays women is more and more active in many social fields and even in love. If you like one guy don’t be shy, you can find some ways to have him. Let start with yourself. What you should do is make you more confident in front of him. For example you can change something about your appearance such as: your hair, your clothes,… everything to make you more adorable. And next, get aqquainted and make friends with him.When you are friends, it’s time to show him your intelligence, your humour, your adorability…. all your good characteristics. And little by little, he will like you. Finally when he wants you to be his girlfriend, the only thing you have to do just say “yes”. Now enjoy yourself and have fun !

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Decribe the process to flirt with someone you fancy
Flirting with someone you fancy? Here are some suggestions to make a good relationship.First,finding out infomation about his that you love.For example his liking,his habit,his work maybe his family.After make conversation naturally through mobiphone or chatting.Remember,you dont awkward when you talk with him.The next step you invite he to go to cinema with his friends.Because go out with he and his friend makes you comfortable and easy to talk.And then you give some present in a special day such as his birthday.Finally when the time is coming,you say with him:"I love you".Now we are ready to start flirting your love

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Decribe the star you admire
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em Đạt-E39 nộp bài writing
Decribe the star you admire
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Em Phương Anh E39 nộp bài writing
Decribe the star you admire

The person who I admire most is Bill Gate.There are so many great thing about this him.He is not only a great charitableness but also a businessman alive to day.Biggest concern is that his computer programming.And then , he found Microsoft and making its became one of the most successful companies in history.He spent a big money on feeding the hungry children in Africa, help cure AIDS, and giving money to schools that needed better technology.I think the word need ones as him.

Describe the process to flirt with someone you fancy
If you want to flirt with someone you fancy.First,you need to acquainted with his friend to get help.Next ,you wil try to find out character and interests of that person.After ,you need to opportunity to talk to him.Then ,you will known he is a form the person you like or not?Finally, If you feel comfortable around you guys, continue. If not, please to say goodbye is gentle.

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1/ I think that, to flint someone isn’t difficult but It’s need a process. When I was fanced about some one, my process to flint have actives:
First, I will ask to his friends about invidiually infomations of him. Estance: his full name, birthday, telephone number, mail address,…After, I have saved message for him. Next, we could talking when we are online. While we are talking, I’ll ask to him about his hobbies. Third, when he really interested in me, I’ll be ask him for a date. I think that, it’s a good ideal when we are just good friends. After that, If he disagees, I’ll be stop our relationship in here. But, when he has agreed, we will prepear for a date. We haved choossen the place and he comes and picks me up. While we are going out together, I have said him that ‘’ I like you’’ and talk about my motion. If he fells in love me, that is mean my plant to flirt successes and this is really serious relationship in our life!
2/.Today, in our life have so many famous stars and I believe that nobody hasn’t idols in ourself. The star who I admire is My Tam singer. She is very famours in Viet Nam’s entertainment field. She is one of the top 10 singers has been like most. She’s got a lovely figure and she is very beautiful with a straight black and brown eyes.Moreover, she has got warm and very emotive voice. It is attracted thousands people. Nearly, she has takes part in movies field. She always tries at work and she achieved so much success. When I was a children, I admired My Tam singer. I’m really exited when she appears on stage or television. I tried to collect her single gramophone record and pictures. When I’m happy or sad, I often hearing her songs, It’s help me cheerful. Now and forever, My Tam singer always in my heart.

Em Việt Anh nộp bài viết
Describe a star.


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