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Write about the following topic:
Happiness is considered very important in life.
Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Happiness is a catch-all term that refers to any way that makes a certain people fell absolutely happy. It is if broad interest to people because conspicuously, anyone who live in the Earth want to achieve happiness. Although as we can observe the fact that the perception of happiness differs considerably from one individual to another
The first reason which explains why happiness definition would never bring unity is rooted in the differences in attitude of people as a result of divergence in social background, individual characteristics and life stages. Indeed, with variety in discrepancy age, it is in general that a child is actually keen on toys, an adult s passionate about occupation and an elder admires family members. In particular, a person need to know purpose what it is that can make him or her happy such as profit as businessman, harvest as farmer, so forth. Perhaps, in their initial stage, the notion seemed inherent but overtime, with better understanding and their variable objectives and interest simultaneously they take the vast definition on this issue.
As you can see the above-mentioned paragraph, in ad***ion to goal, satisfaction is essential con***ion for attaining happiness. An example is taking monetary wealth, deserve people’s greatest attention. It is crucial that we look at the facts a number of people sacrifice everything in their pursuit of wealth, whereas in reality some people take money lightly. Meanwhile it is no exaggeration to say that some people are far more capable of earning money but it seems to be that they fell endlessly unsatisfied. It should be taken as the cause of not only individual viewpoint but also built-in characteristic.
According to the above statement, we can observe that happiness is absolutely difficult to achieve but toward some people, it is a simple thing. To date, there is variety answer to question of reaching happiness
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Topic: Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restriction on what they do
Do what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion
Art is a catch-all term that refers to any activity that conveys artists’ own ideas to public by any means and in any form, specifically the right to freedom of expression. The dramatic increase in government resistance in recent years has sparked controversy over the potential impacts of this trend on cultural society. Some people are concerned that it will promote hostility of artists against government instead of promoting their capability. In my opinion, there are number of facts indicating that position is right.
The first reason which explains why people would never support government limitation is rooted in the fact that both audiences and artists actually hope artistically motivate. It seems to be that encouragement of government opens up absolutely opportunities for appearance of famous works which involves architecture, paintings, songs or films. It should be noted that artists create artworks to inspire people to be creative and encourage them to reflect on what happened in the world. Therefore, the public are interested not only significant works but also its authors. In the modern life today, newspapers and international media are there to provide news of artists what the public wants to know such as what they are making, how they are living, so on. It is crucial that the government should learn their hospitality to artists in exchange for trust public by certain way like investing a lot of money in art.
Undeniably, it is likely that if government make artists to fell overly free and easy to show any opinion, perhaps the authority lost control a number of types of artworks, conspicuously involve kind of negative effect. Understanding an artwork has other implications. Differences in social background, cultural values and religious belief might make the discrepancy of perception on their works. Some artists introduce unusual or even offensive images, without looking after the felling of audiences. However, it should be noted that most offense is accidental, rather than intentional. Some of people or bad groups had abused graphic ***ual images, obscene works in the guise of artworks to the public. It places healthy lifestyle of audiences at risk, especially that of children. This situation is expected to be improved with the passing of time when people increase their perception of cultural society and government has the potential policies to thwart bad works.
According to the above analysis, we can observe that artists should be allowed freedom to perform their viewpoints although some of the artworks should be examined before being made available to the public. It maybe is a solution of this issue that people now should try to minimize its negative effects as soon as possible.

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Happiness is considered very important in life.
Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?


Happiness is a abstract term that it is difficult to describe exactly, although it connects closely to people’s life. The dramatic increase in defining happiness in recent years has sparked controversy over what makes people feel happy. Some people are concerned whether material wealth brings us true happiness.

The reason why this concept is not able to be determined clearly is rooted in the fact that each person has personal idea about it. This opens up opportunities for argument how to attain happiness. People are interested not only in material wealth but also mental wealth. Especially young people should learn to treasure what they own, such as family solidarity, expected career, rather than running after money. In turn, a positive attitude is able to help us easily succeed in life. Almost people share a view that satisfaction is a vital con***ion for happiness.

Happiness notion actually has many implications. Differences in viewpoint and goal might make the discrepancy of one person and another on what brings happiness. Although some people are in a high economic class, they still pursue material value and might not feel happy. Conversely, poor people are likely to get happiness simply because they do not esteem money as their goal in life, they have a high opinion of moral value, family happiness and job satisfaction.

Undeniably, money enables people to obtain a lot of things they want, including success and happiness. However, as money is considered above all, it appears to control people and causes people much unhappiness. For instant, siblings might fight because of inheritance, imperialist countries waged aggressive wars to gain gold, silver and other natural resources.


According to the above analysis, we can observe that although people have different views on happiness, satisfaction is taken as prerequisite for happiness. Therefore, people should tend to moral value, rather than material wealth, because this is true happiness.

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