Ms.Thuy's class (3rd floor)

to sis: chị ơi, hnay cho em đến lớp muộn một chút nhé!hihihihihihi.......8h em mới đến được!!!!!!!!!! em MUAH chị nhé!!to Nhuy: htrước em không đi học làm cho cái chỗ ngồi gần cửa sổ có con chim lợn chẳng có ai ngồi, khổ thân Huonghen lại thế chỗ........hic....hic.hic!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hay quá hôm nay mới được mở rộng tầm mắt

How to write an interesting introduction
(or how not to bore your examiner!)
Imagine: A man is sitting in a dark room, even though it is a beautiful day outside. His neck is aching, his back is hurting - not surprising, as he has been sitting at his desk for the last four hours, marking essay after essay, although he would far rather be out enjoying the lovely weather. Slowly, he picks up another exam. Slowly - because they are all so boring.
He starts reading the essay - your essay - when suddenly he sits up. This one is different, he thinks, this one is good...
This really happens - I know, I used to be an examiner! Most students are concerned only with their grammar, and not with the content. The result? Very boring essays. However, when an examiner does get an interesting essay, he''s really impressed - and you get higher marks.
To write an interesting essay you need an interesting introduction - get your examiner''s attention from the first line.
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Test it
To show you how to write interesting introductions, we''ve taken the essay question below and written 8 different openings for it.
The problems in modern society today are caused by a lack of discipline at home from an early age.
Discuss, giving your opinion.

Match the following openings to the different ways of starting an essay listed below:
A. Children should be beaten regularly, and beaten until they bleed, if they are to become good people. This is the view that seems to be held by some extremists. In fact, though, a balance has to be maintained between the need to maintain reasonable discipline, and the need to protect the rights of the child.
B. Before considering the importance of discipline, it is worth discussing just what discipline is, as it seems to mean different things to different people.
C. Children are the foundation of our future society. So if we want to have a good future, we must build a solid foundation ?" by looking after our children, not by disciplining them.
D. ?oPhysical discipline is not the answer to children''s behavioural problems, and can lead to children becoming physically and mentally damaged.?
E. In the nineteenth century children were supposed to be seen and not heard. A softening of attitudes followed in the first half of the twentieth century, with children encouraged to speak more, and voice their opinion ?" respectfully, of course. Swearing at the table would never have been dreamed of!
F. ?oDiscipline children! The poor little things. We should give them anything they want. They should never be allowed to hear the word No!? So might say the typical modern parent ?" but is this really the way to bring up children?
G. Discipline. It''s something that all of us have encountered, whether from teachers or from parents. But how good are you, or would you be, at disciplining your own children?
H. Just why do some parents think they can bring up children without any discipline at all? Such an approach just leads the children to a life of crime.
Different ways of starting an essay.
1. Starting with a rhetorical question. (A rhetorical question which you ask ?" and then answer yourself.)
2. Historical approach.
3. Defining terms
4. Reference to authority.
5. Metaphor/simile.
6. Making essay sound real or immediate through use of dialogue
7. Addressing reader.
8. Starting with a shocking/controversial statement ?" which you can then argue or disagree with.
@Huyền:đã email Huyền từ sáng hum qua rùi nhécheck lại coi

kemchua, huonghen: cho iem xin lỗi nhà mình vì hum qua iem không đi học được, iem mún bít hum qua học gì hả chị kemchua? em huonghen cho chị bít với,
sis: iem cũng xin lỗi sis nữa,
kemchua: lâu rồi không bít mặt mũi chị dạo này thế nào nhẩy?

Mệt wá...home nay đi muộn mất roài.
@huonghen : Mình hay đổi số, nên nếu bạn nt vào 1 số mà hôm trước là của mình, có thể home sau người nhận được tin nhắn chúc mừng giáng sinh dễ thương lại là một ai đó.. Hôm qua có đi học không, nếu có thì tóm tắt lại bài cho mình với. Ah, nhân tiện mình nhờ bạn photo hộ các bài của 2 tuần vừa qua nhé, nếu được thì thứ 7 mình lấy, được không?
@Pretti : Mình hiểu bạn đang nghĩ gì, nhưng rất tiếc ...sự thật thì thường không như chúng ta nghĩ. Mà nghĩ nhìu làm gì... mệt lắm, relax đi nhé
@Sis : "Everyday is not Sunday" dịch là "sông có khúc người có lúc" đúng không Sis. Có thông tin gì về lớp Pre chưa ạh?

to chị Nhưy (moon light) hí hí và anh ếch xanh: hôm qua học về comparative.hôm qua đi học vui lắm í học được mấy câu bùn cười chít...hai người liệu liệu mà trả công cho e nhé, đặc biệt là chị Ý í, hôm qua e ngồi đúng chỗ chim lợn, nhưng ko biết là chim lợn bố hay con
anh ếch ơi tài liệu của sis đưa í, ko có rì đâu, chỉ có cái e chép thôi. Các bài anh nghỉ gùm có basic writting knowledge review&pratce, thesis statement (part 2),Beauti dies, comparative. thứ 7 e mang cho nhé!!!
sis ơi huhu sis ko gửi bài grem mờ cho e à... kaka sis ơi tối qua e phát hiện ra một người ko biết muah là rì thật cái người tối qua mang nước cho chị í
mọi người ko đi học í, ko biết hôm qua ai đó mắc bệnh ấy và bệnh phốc kaka
tối qua về e học đc 2 câu mới cũng hay lém :
born to be yours : I sinh ra là để cho em kaka
You know me than I do e hiểu anh hơn cả bản thân anh
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Được huonghen sửa chữa / chuyển vào 10:28 ngày 27/12/2006

Hi
@nhuy và Ếch,Tú......:2 người mượn vở mọi người chép hum qua nhé,rùi sẽ giao cho chồn bông+hưonghen giảng lại cho mọi người xem thía nào,nếu có khúc mắc gì thì hỏi lại nhá,nhất là những chỗ update của phần Comparison ấy
@huonghen:ko hỉu sao YM và mail ko vào được đúng ko mọi người?cho nên chịu,ko gửi mail được cho ai cả
Nào thì chủ điểm tình iu tình báo nhé
whisper sweet nothings in someone''s ear- romantic, intimate talk.Ex:The movie was rather romantic and most of the scenes had the actor whispering sweet nothings in the ear of the actress.
go dutch- a date where each person pays half of the expenses.Ex:In university many of the students had little money so they often went dutch when they were on a date.
a match made in heaven- a couple who get along perfectly.Ex:When the two people finally got together it was a match made in heaven and everyone thought that they would stay together forever
pop the question- ask someone to marry you.Ex:He put much thought into his possible wedding before he actually decided to pop the question.
I can hear wedding bells I suspect that they are going to get married soon
I must/I''ll love you and leave you. (humorous)
something that you say when you say goodbye to someone that you are leaving. Well, I''m sure you''ve got work to be doing so I''ll love you and leave you.
love someone to death to feel extremely strong affection for someone. She is easy to work with, and everyone in the office loves her to death.
Some common LOVE quotes
1.Love, like a river, will cut a new path whenever it meets an obstacle.- Crystal Middlemas 2.There is only one happiness in life,to love and be loved.- George Sand ?"
3.You know you are in love when you see the world in her eyes, and her eyes everywhere in the world.- David Levesque ?"
4.Love is strong yet delicate.It can be broken.To truly love is to understand this.To be in love is to respect this.- Stephen Packer ?"
5.When you love someone,all your saved-up wishes start coming out.- Elizabeth Bowen ?"
5.Marriage is not a ritual or an end.It is a long, intricate,intimate dance together and nothing matters more than your own sense of balance and your choice of partner.- Amy Bloom ?"
6.Love is like a mountain,hard to climb,but once you get to the top the view is beautiful.
- Daniel Monroe Tuttle ?"
7.Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more it is willing to see less.- Will Moss ?"
8.Love is like the sun coming out of the clouds and warming your soul.- Author Unknown ?"
9.To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world.- Bill Wilson ?"
10.Love is smiling on the inside and out.- Jennifer Williams ?"
11.Love is a moment that lasts forever...- Julie Wittey ?"
12.Love that is true never grows old.- Elben Bano ?"
13.Love reminds you that nothing else matters.- Amy Bushell ?"
14.A Friend''s Love says:" If you ever need anything,I''ll be there."
True Love says:" You''ll never need anything;I''ll be there."- Jimi Hollemans ?"
15.Love is a decision not an emotion or feeling,that if made from the heart will outlast anything...- Raul and Samantha Juarez ?"
16.Love is more than a feeling;it''s a state of mind.- Lisa Grude ?"
17.A bell is not a bell until someone rings it,
a song is not a song until someone sings it.
Love wasn''t put in the heart to stay,
for love isn''t love ''til you give it away.- Chanh Kha ?"
18.The way to love anything is to realize that it might be lost.- G. K. Chesterton ?"
19.Love,The key that unlocks the bars of impossibility.- Fikayo Ositelu ?"
20.Real love is feeling like being a part of that person''s life almost isn''t enough. It''s more like a feeling that you would live in the same skin with them if you could and share every thought, heart beat, and emotion as one.- Rod Cannon ?"
21.Love is something you can''t describe like the look of a rose, the smell of the rain,or the feeling of forever.- Kristen Kappel ?"
22.Love is not needing a snooze button on your alarm clock because when it goes off the first time in the morning the thoughts of your loved one make it impossible to fall back asleep.- Natasha Harris ?"
23.The best things in life can never be kept; They must be given away. A Smile, a Kiss, and Love - Tony Farrar ?"
@Ếch:Hum qua mọi người trong lớp đăng kí hết chỗ lớp P1 rùi,sẽ học 3 buổi 1 tuần với cường độ cao,hì hìchi tiết cụ thể thì chắc mai hoặc ngày kia nhé,hum nay có người hẹn mình mà(ai thế nhỉ?)

Này thì Tình iu :
Love likes a dog, when we want to catch her, she runs away. When we run away she tries to catch us. When we stay the same she barks: "go..go"
Tạm dịch : Tình yêu như là con ....chó đê (định dịch cún cho nịch sự nhưng thoai,) khi ta đuổi thì nó chạy, khi ta chạy thì nó đuổi. Khi ta đứng yên thì nó sủa " go..go".
Được NightFox sửa chữa / chuyển vào 15:03 ngày 27/12/2006

ôi giời ôi huhu mạng kiểu rì cả ngày hôm nay ko sign in đc, e chết mất thôi...khó chịu quá!!!Cái bọn kĩ thuật nó bảo với em là cổng kết nối với các trang nước ngoài đang trục trặc, ôi xời ôi, trang e vào toàn trang host nc ngoài...ặc ặc
hức chết mất, mai còn thế chắc die luôn
á đấy sis nhắc e mới nhớ, Tú xinh trốn học nhá!!!
khiếp nai phốc sao ko chuyển sang cái khác nhờ cứ phải dog mới đc à...