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Thanks kiku so much
This is my presentation''s content.

Thanks kiku so much
-> Thank kiku
@ Sis Chick: Give me ur outline or writing in detail ( if ur active in using language, the detail will help the word choice or grammar structure be better. However, if not, u seem to be a reading machine no more )
Hope that helps

Audience should be used as a singular noun with general meaning
never before have I pronunciated this word with /es/...
....uhmmm...may be I was in the air at that time

This will be the first time I present by English. In fact, presentation is not a difficult thing for me to do. I just don''t know some linking words
Here, my presentation''s out line
1. Slide1:
Hanoi is developing city -> traffic is burning problem.
Bus is a new kind of transport, however, motorbike is increasing.
We compare between bus and motorbike for :
+ Traffic
+ Environment
+ User
2. Slide 2: Traffic
+ The more using bus, the less space for others
+ The more motorbike, the more parking.
3. Slide 3 : Environment
+ Bus and motorbike are vehicles which cause air pollution.
+ 1 bus equal 10 motorbike in air pollution.
4. Slide 4 : User
+ Safety : Using bus is safer than using motorbike
+ Independence: Using motorbike is more free than bus
+ Speed : Motorbike is faster than bus
5. Slide 5 : Conclusion
+ Governor should develop public transport system, bus is an exmple
+ In my opinion, I choose motorbike

Hope this what u need

Steps towards a presentation and words/phrases/sentences for signposting​

I. Introduction
Fairly formal

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. On behalf of...may I welcome u to... This morning, I''d like to discuss/report on/present...

In my presentation I am going to/would like to explain/present/propose...
The subject/topic of my presentation is...
what i''d like to do/am going to do this morning is to...
More friendly
O.K, let''s get started.
Morning, everyone. Thanks for coming.
* Signposting the whole presentation:
1. I''ll be developing three main points. They are....respectively
2. First, I''ll give u...Second,....Lastly,...
3. My presentation will be in two main parts. In the first part I''ll...And then I''ll....lastly I''ll finish with...
II. Body
* Signposting the route through a presentation
1. I''ll begin by...
2. Let''s start with...
3. My next point is...
4. Now, turning to...
5. Let me move on to...
* Using summaries
1. So that''s the general picture for...and now let''s look at...
2. That completes my overview of ....so now I''d like to move on to...
* Using connecting words
1. (a different argument): however, on the other hand, although, in spite of this.
2. (a consequence): therefore, so, consequently, because of this, as a result.
3 (ad***ional argument): moreover, in ad***ion to this, not only....but also
* Using slides
1. The next slide shows...
2. This slide gives information about...
3. This slide compares the difference and the similarity between...
* Explaning options
1. One way to solve this problem is...Another is to...
2. Let''s look at three options...
3. The first option is to...But what about the second option?
4. You can see here (pointing at the slide ) the...
* Focusing ur audience''s attention
1. What is important/interesting is...
2. I''d like to draw ur attention to...
3. Stress the adjective
4. Stress the qualifier (e.g: particularly, hardly...)
III. Conclusion
1. So, *****mmarise/sum up...
2. So, as we''ve seen in this presentation today...
3. At this stage, I''d like to go over/run through...
4. I''d be happy to answer any questions/I''d be pleased to answer them
5. I would welcome any comments
* Clarifying questions
1. I am sorry, I didn''t hear. Which slide was it?
2. Sorry, could u repeat that?
3. Do u mean that...
4. So, what u''re asking is...
* Answering questions
1. Well, as I said that...
2. I think I answered that earlier...
3. I wish I knew..
4. To be honest/honestly, I think that raises a different issue
5. That''s a very good question
6. I''m afraid I don''t have that information with me
*handling difficult questions
1. Well, I am glad u asked that but there''re some minutes left/ time is limited/up now, so I will answer u after this presentation.../plse give me ur contact, I will try to anwer soon.
2. Well, I am sorry but this is beyond my knowledge. Maybe I will read more about that and give u the answer later.
3. Sorry but I am afraid that I''m not the right person to answer that. Mr...is a much better one.
4. Well, I see ur point but I am not sure this is the right place/time to discuss this particular question.

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Cấm post ngoại ngữ ở đây
Có 1 topic riêng rồi mà

chẹp, hoa hết cả mắt, đây thành topic trau dồi ngoại ngữ à..

after having read ur presenation outline, i found out ur topic is very good and contemporarily related. but ur outline and content of ur presentation is too much subjective-based, and lack of basic knowledge on the distinction between public and private transport. let go to details, shall we?
1. in slide 1 and 2:
comparison of bus and motorbike as public and private transport.u''re very good when pointing the currently conflicted issues for bus and motorbike on traffic, environment, and road users. but to be more detail, in my point of view, the word "traffic" should be substituted by "accessibility and mobility" and the word "road user" should be replaced by "safety issues", alittle bit more specilising concern. in accessibility and mobility, u should mention about how convenient and comfortable and reverse of using bus, of using motorbike when travelling in the city, out of the city. it''s not only the problems of parking and occupancies.
2. environmental issue:
i really appreciate what u''ve talked about environmental issues. but u should go further on how and what level of impact to the environemt from bus and motorbike. for instance, u can given an example of the number of motorbikes in comparison to the number of bus in the city in order to give the data of which mode of transport will cause more impact to environment.
3. road safety: road safety is very important to road users and people related to roads, such as cylists, pedestrians, etc. u have mentioned about travelling by bus is more secure than travelling by motorbike. that''s very impressive. but also u can mention on other people related to road maybe affected by bus and motorbike, and which affects more to road users.
4. conclusions
i loved the words u said about although bus should be encouraged and promoted by government, but u preferred motorbike, ha ha, very subjective.
and the last point, i think u should have changed the topic from too much details to a bit broader area: public transport vs private transport in order to give a comprehensive view about transport con***ion of the country. that will make ur presentation much better.
hope u find it helpful

by the way, there is one more thing u should be considered when witing. try to use more relevant words, correct words, hic hic