The Environment

Do you know what on earth you can?Tt live without ? Breathing ? Eating ? Drinking ?...Yes, all of things you want to breathe , eat and drink are called ?o The Environment? . Nowadays , it become ?oa heated even? not only in a country but also all over the world.
The environment consists of many things such as air , water , plants and animals ...They are resouces of human life because they provides with a lot of things to continue our life: oxygen to breathe, food to eat and the other things that make life exciting but nowadays our environment are becoming worst and polluted quickly.
* When wastes are poured into the atmosphere, the air becomes contaminated and unpleasant to beathe. This is air pollution
-Water vapour and carbon dioxide occur in the air naturally . Examples of air pollution are dust storms, volcanic eruptions forest fire caused by lightning , pollen and marsh gases.
- A large amount of air pollution in cities comes from sources other than industry , mainly automobiles , home heating and garbage disposal
- Vehides also account for air pollution in the cities . Automobile exhaust and some industrial processes contain carbon monoxide , an odourless gas which can?Tt be seen or tasted . Nitric oxide is another tail-pipe emission that is highly poisonour and may sometimes change into the even more dangerous nitrogen dioxide.
- Lead and smoke are emitted in engine exhausts as tiny particles
- Industrial smoke stacks throw out sulphur and nitrogen oxdes
- Burning coal and oil releases other gases harmful to human . The most serious of these gases is sulphur dioxide .In the atmosphere it can combine with water vapour and oxygen to turn in*****lphuric-acid mist
- Hydrogen fluoride is produced in the manyacture of phosphate fertilizers andsome metals
- Burning garbage and paper wastes pollutes the air with unpleasant odours. Dangerous chemical can be released from burning plastics or hairspray containers
*Besides air pollution, water pollution is also ?oa hearchache-problems? in many countries .Almost of us water everyday in daily activities such as : cooking , bathing , drinking and watering...It?Ts also the material for industtrial and aggricultural producting. But do you know our water resources becoming extremely polluted especialy the oceans. Most of this pollution comes from the land which mean it comes from people .
- Firstly there is raw sewerage which is pumped directly into the sea . Many countries , both developed and developing , are quilty of doing this.
- Secondly ships drop about 6 million tons of garbage into the sea each year
- Thirdly , there are oil spills from ships. A ship has an accident and oils leaks from the vessel . This not only pollutes the water , but it also kills mairne life .
- Next, there are waste materials from factories . Without proper regulations , factory owners let the waste run directly into the river which then leads to the sea . And finally , oil is washed from land . This can be the result of carelessmess or a deliberate dumping of waste
*In ad***ion, people are breaking the order of ecosytem. They are destroying forests by cutting and burning trees without permissions. As you know , plants product oxygen and lessen carbonic in atmosphere forests provide with timber-one of Man?Ts most valuable resources, trees and shrubs preserve land because their roots bind the soil and retain water that can prevent erosion . Many worth ness to human but they themselves don?Tt take care of ecosytem . Trees in the forests are cut that leads to the fact that the living areas of will-animals are threatening . More over a large amount of animal is hunted and stolen to export to foreign contries makes few kinds of animals entintic .All of these : air pollution , water pollution and the breaking-ecosytem are directly effective to human life . When they are not got away quickly , our life will be dangerous . So what should we do to prevent them?
- Firsly ,to protect air , we should hinder the industrial factories from exhausting poisonous smoke . In the future , air will be clearer if the governments have laws that cars are forbidded . Instead of them , people should search for alternative fuels , such as energy of the sun burning of solf fuels . Some large cities should have to ban cars from the city centre to wipe out smoke and stop burning coal , oil ,garbage in big cities which have an enormous number of people.
- Secondly, to protect water, we shouldn?Tt drop garbage into the sea .When a ship has an accident , oils from vessel must be taken away as son as possible . Waste materials from factories should be situated before being let to run directly into the river, the sea
- Lastly , to preserve natiaral resources , we should protect wild-life by passing laws restricting hunting and fishing , ban to fire mine dynamit in the rives and seas, forbidding the illegal exploiting, cutting timber and the goverment should encourage people to plant trees in every emty areas .We can also protec land by yearly rotation of crops , so that different elements of the soil have time to replace lost elements and prevent erosion by ploughing along the contours of a hill rather than up and down . In this way water doesn?Tt run of and take the soil with it.
The environment is considered a close friend of human life . It?Ts also the only thing to continue our life . So how we can do for this ?ofriend? besides conservation? That means ,our life will be longer and healthier.

Nguyen Truong Nam
Business and Accouting




Trinh Y Kiet in 1980 Family


Được sửa chữa bởi - milou vào 12/03/2002 10:04

Hi,
The above essay was written by you, I guess. Basically, you know how to write an essay but you may need some extra works to make it more formal and understandable.
A good essay is made up with a good format, a good choice of words, a good structure of sentences and some other tricks.
There are 2 types of essays: Argument and Discussion. In Argument essays, all of your points will only support or oppose the given issue. On the other hand, you need to balance your main points in a Discussion essay. That is, if you have 3 positive points then you need to have 3 negative points.
First, let's look at the format. There are 3 parts in an essay: introduction, body and conclusion.
The introduction leads readers from general things to a specific issue about which you are going to argue or discuss. This part should consist of 3 to 5 sentences and it is written as 1 paragraph. In this part, you also introduce the main points to be discussed later in your essay.
The body is where you express your main points. Each main point is written as a paragraph. Words like besides, in ad***ion, furthermore, eventually, consequently, firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally, on the other hand, however, in contrast... are used to move from a point to another and they are put at the beginning of a paragraph which represents a new main point. They are indicators which tell readers whether the context of the next paragraph supports or opposes the current one. The first sentence should "hit" the main point. Other senctences will make it clearer and expand that point.
A conclusion starts with in conclusion, in summary, summarily... Here, you mention again the points having been discussed. Then you express your view. That is which side (negative or positive) you support. You may further develop by talking about solutions, possibilities in the future.
In essays, you do not use sentences with "I, we, our, us..." because they epress your personal opinion which will informalise your essay. You can use passive sentences instead. In ad***ion, the short-forms like it's, they're... are avoided. Things shouldn't be repeated otherwise the writting will be boring (that's why firstly, seconly, thirdly is not favourable). Firstly, finally, lastly should only be used once for the first and the last point.
You may find various writting texts available in the market. IELTS is also a great source of writting materials.
Nice to know you are doing a business degree in Accounting. Keep up the good work

Trinh Y Kiet in 1980 Family

Just move this article here from box Public . I did not read it yet .

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