TOPICS FOR WRITING

Pa` kon, cô bác, anh chị huynh đệ xa gần ơi....!!!!

Đệ sắp thi B, có vài chục cái Topics thầy giáo đưa để nghiên cứu, chuẩn bị, . Mấy cái kia thì đệ ráng làm, còn 10 cái này khó "gặm" quá, mong bà kon giúp đệ với!!! Tiếng anh của đệ thì.... lắm ạ!!!

Đa tạ bà con trước nhiều thiệt nhìu. cho bác trai cho bác gái...
A` deadline của đệ là Sep. 5th ạ...

TOPICS FOR WRITING

Write a composition of abt 150- 200 words on one of the following topics.

1.If you can change one day in your life, which day would you change? How would your life be different now?

2.Write an essay classifying different kinds of lies that you have been told and how did they affect your feelings?

3.If you were appointed Minister of Education. What kinds of actions would you take in order to send street children back to school? Write down your plan?

4.Some citizens are strongly in favor of the development of nuclear power, but others argue that nuclear power is a danger to life on earth. Tell which position you agree with and why?

5.Some people argue that vast sum of money should be spent to explore space. Others argue that it is better to solve earth?Ts problem before going out into space. Tell which position you agree with and why?

6.Some people say that parents should be responsible for the crimes that their underage childen commit. Others say that the parent should not be punished for a crime committed by another person. Which view of point do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples *****pport your answer.

7.Some people place a high value on loyalty to the employer. To others, it is perfectly acceptable to change jobs every years to build a career. Tell which position you agree with and why.

8.The problem of over population.

9.Some families have many childen, while others have only one child. Think abt the positive and negative aspects of being in a family with several childen. What size of family seems the best? Why?

10.Some studens prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer?

Essay của bạn cần độ dài bao nhiêu vậy. Có yêu cầu gì khác nữa ko

độ dài của essay thầy tớ bảo là từ 150 từ - 200 từ. Tối thiểu cũng nên 100 từ cho nó "bằng chị bằng em".
vâng, bác nào giỏi anh văn, giúi em với ạ.
xin đa tạ các bác.

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Bây giờ là Topic 10.
Self-study or with others: which is a personal preferred method?
I personally prefer to study with others.
By studying in a group, we can accomplish a lot more. We will be able to exchange information among each other.
As a group of individuals, we can share our knowledge, ideas, opinions, and even work loads. Instead of reading and trying to absorb information from our sources, with working with others, we all can read and absorb information then share them with others in the group. Also, after sharing the information that we have read, we can discuss, debate, whatever the case may be. One thing for sure is that we all will learn from each other.
Team work ?" we achieve more.

Tớ thử cho vài nhận xét nhá :
I personally prefer to study with others [with other people hoặc in group nghe hay hơn ...].
By studying in a group [chỉ cần nói by studying in this way để tránh lập lại], we can accomplish a lot more. We will be able to exchange information among each other [one another chứ, vì có nhiều hơn hai người, ngoài ra có lẽ nên dùng between thay vì among].
As a group of individuals [group là đủ rồi, tất nhiên là nhóm người, ngoài ra cũng nên dùng từ khác: Working together ...], we can share our knowledge, ideas, opinions, and even work loads. Instead of reading and trying to absorb information from our sources, with working with others [thế with bằng by], we all can read and absorb information then share them [thế them bằng it, information là danh từ không đếm được, hoặc dùng: share what we have absorbed] with others [lập chữ with others, nên dùng khác: with our partners, with our friends ...] in the group. Also [có lẽ nên bỏ also], after sharing the information that [bỏ luôn that cho đỡ nặng nề] we have read, we can discuss, debate, whatever the case may be. One thing for sure is that we all will learn from each other [from one another].
Team work ?" we achieve more.
Bài này nhìn chung là đạt đấy chứ.

Mình có thể giúp bạn thêm ideas:
Working in group reduces amount of time because the things which need doing are diviced in many part and each person in group takes over each part.
----------------------- makes people more eager to work
-----------------------develops everyone''s ability because everyone specializes in their own field
----------------------- maké people more responsible for their tasks because if one member does not finish his task, the result may be not good and not one but all the members have to be blamed for it.

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