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the disadvantages of telephone, television and computer
Most of us know that scientific technology is really changing human beings'' lives. It means we are living in high technological society. However, living in this society does not mean that what we have created or invented does not harm us. Television, computer and telephone are things that researchers are really worrying about. Sometimes they change our lives in negative ways. They influent on our health, time, society, etc...
First of all, television, computer and telephone harm our health. According to the studies, television and computer seriously affect to people''s eyes. A person can sit in front of the computer or T.V at most two hours a day otherwise the X-ray will make his eyes become worse. Also, sitting is one of the activities we must do when using computer or watching T.V. This probably causes our skeleton more passive. It means our spine will be "senile" not because of our ages. In ad***ion, the American researchers say that by using much computer or T.V "we will respond by bringing into shutdown mechanism" it makes us more quieted. The watchers and the users may be very passive. That''s why television and computer are not good for our health.
But health is only on of the problems we have to face. Another is that these things affect our society. People who watch or use computer and T.V too much may be affected to their behaviors. They might learn how to behave violently from the website, or bad matters on T.V, especially for children. They imitate what they saw on T.V and do them with their friends. It makes society get more and more crimes. Also, the bad website cause people get wrong information. The knowledge they gain may completely incorrect. They may be not aware of some thing or misunderstand it. Moreover, when computer and telephone are used in factories, companies, they control other machines. It sounds pretty good bit not good for labors. They will make the unemployed rate get growing. And crime is also increased.
Thirdly, television, computer and telephone take us a lot of time. Now, there are a lot of programs, websites which attract many people. Instead of doing their works, they spend much times on watching T.V, on web. So do them with telephone. Chatting with friends on phone is the youth''s favorites. It probably may waste of time. Why donâ?Tt people think that they can do some things very necessary or important replacing for their wastes?
Any how, to show all of problem about television, computer and telephone that people is facing is not easy. They lift our society up to the sky, but also bring with us bad affect. Therefore, people should use them reasonably.

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đây là bài luận mới của mình về disadvantages of smoking
hi vongmọi người giúp mình xem xét ::
According to statistic figures, we learn that about 40,000 people die from smoking cigarettes in Vietnam every year. What about in other countries? Smoking is not a good habit which makes us beneficial. There are a lot of reasons why we should not smoke, and ought to give up smoking.
The first reason is that smoking affects our health. Some people always justify that their habit of smoking is very good, but they can not image how dangerous it is. Researchers show that the smoke has a lot of poisons such as nicotine, hydrogen cyanide, carbon monoxide which cause many kinds of diseases. How do people feel of they realize that they have heart-disease, stroke, or lung cancer after long time smoking. Also, smoking makes the rate of osteoporosis, asthma and many respiratory diseases increased rapidly. Moreover, the smokers can cause diseases to non-smokers. Because non-smokers will probably get secondhand smoke when sitting beside smokers. Therefore, they can get disease as serious as smokers. It causes the proportion of deaths com up to more than 564,000 people.
The second reason is that smoking will influence on our surroundings. Some people don''''t often worry about sitting next to the smokers .That is why they don?Tt know the air around them is polluted by carcinogen, one of smokes causing cancer. In ad***ion, this chemical can combine with other gases and smokers to be more dangerous, so it will cause disease above. Also, smoking easily permeates our clothing, stuffed furniture with an offensive odor. Therefore, of course, people can see that what will happen to our environment if there are all of poisonous smokes and offensive odors.
Another serious reason is smoker''''s expensive habit. For the rich, it is not a big matter if they smoke, but for the poor or people in middle class, what will happen? According to W.H.O''''s statistic, if a person smokes 10 cigarettes a day, it will cost him £ 16.87 a week, £ 73.50 a month, and amount of £879, 63 a year. With a big sum of money, the smokers can save a lot of money in their life, or they can do everything more important instead of smoking cigarettes.
All in all, smoking is disadvantage. That is why smokers should give up smoking, not only for themselves but for other people. Our health, our environment and money are all important. If we know how to save them, we will probable have better life.
Được minhtrang86_vn sửa chữa / chuyển vào 13:42 ngày 27/08/2006