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Topic: Should governments spend more money on improving roads and highways, or should governments spend more money on improving public transportation (buses, trains, subways)? Why use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay
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It is said that transportation system is one of the most important factors, which affects dramatically to any economy. In developed countries, the infrastructure is developed properly and effectively. However in other countries, especially in poor countries, it is rather popular to acknowledge that public transportation is poor in network, bad in design, and difficult in moving. To my way of thinking, I do think that government should pay more attention to improve roads and highways rather than spending money for transportation means.
Firstly, by upgrading infrastructure framework, it will facilitate to improve our amenities of life. The more roads are re-organized and broadened, the easier everything can be solved. When we have a good con***ion of transportation, moving activities will be placed faster and more effectively. For example, for some people like journalists, lawyers, tour guidersõ?Ưwho have the most wanted demands for long moving will overcome the difficulties of means, time or distance. It will only take two hours to go to the airport for a business trip, nearly five hours to go around for city view, or even a few minutes for emergency to hospitalõ?Ư
Secondly, a good transportation system will help to improve our economy. If transportation activities can be executed smoothly such as shipping products, tracking the goods inlandõ?Ư business will run better. So more investors will keep eyes on the trade in this area accordingly. For a developing country, transportation framework is considered a luring factor to foreign investors for doing business. For example, if our goods cannot arrive in time, our business will face to many difficulties like: compensation for late delivery, defected goods, poor image etc.
Finally, improving roads or highways does not only aim to solve transportation problems at once. What we will do if we have modern and luxurious transportation means (buses, trains, tubes.) but we have poor con***ion infrastructure. It could be operated well when the core matter is still not be handled. If our government pays big enough attention to this problem, we will pave the way for future development for our country. It is not only meaningful to our present activities but also important to long- term construction. Sweet fruits are normally created from good roots.
In short, transportation network plays an important role in any economies. To improve amenities of life, develop economyõ?Ư no one doubts that government must spend more money in upgrading and modernizing transportation framework.

Tks so lot!

BỏĂn có bỏằp hỏằc chỏc. Có ai mà cỏằâ bỏằ thỏằi gian ra chỏằa bài cho bỏĂn mÊi 'ặỏằÊc. Đúng là 'ặỏằÊc voi 'òi tiên. Ngặỏằi Viỏằ?t cỏằâ nhặ thỏ này thơ làm sao mà khĂ 'ặỏằÊc. Hỏằc tỏưp ngặỏằi do ThĂi 'i !

Thì bạn không sửa thì thôi ,đừng mắng bạn í tội nghiệp , dù sao bạn í cũng cố gắng rồi.

Được minhtrang86_vn sửa chữa / chuyển vào 09:09 ngày 02/09/2006

OH, BAN MOI THAT LA CO VAN DE, BAN CO THE KO CAN COMMENT NEU KO MUON. CO NHUNG BAN KHAC CUNG MUON STUDY CO MA.
HOC TAP GIONG NGUOI DO THAI DE NGHEO AH ?? HAHA
DC VOI DOI` TIEN NHU VAY MOI KHA LEN DC. MAKING PERRFECT MA`..

Tks Tranng
Anyway, i think " affect to sb/ sth " is right !
Corect me if it''s not.

Great! I highly approciate Trang''s idea and I think that we should have some of line meeting to tell with all people about our difficulties in learning Writing.
This thought will help all of them .
Thank Trang so much

Sau affect ko bao giờ có prepostion, trừ trường hợp passive sẽ là to be affected by.
Ex:
The building was badly affected by the fire.
The divorce affected every aspect of her life.

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