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With the desire to improve my English and to express my point of view.(,)I (nên bỏ attempt đi, em nghĩ thế) write this essay (,) (write an essay chứ không ai write a topic) which might contain many mistakes. Your assisstance would be appreciated. Nowadays, (em nghĩ nên bỏ there are và who đi, shorten cái câu này lại) many people are crazy about Korea''''s serial films. Sometimes, I wonder (be consistent with verb tenses, once you use present, try to stick to it) what is interesting about those movies. I myself can not stand it (them) for even 5 minutes. Although personal taste(s) are different, we have to obey the standards of art (?). There are many aspects to consider (to consider thôi, không cần be) when evaluating a movie (Do u think the subject of the verb "evaluate" is all the same as that of "there are"???, Thus, IMHO ===> There are many aspects to consider when we evaluate a movie/There are many aspects to consider when a movie is evaluated/When evaluating a movie, we have to/are to consider many aspects/There are many aspects to consider IN evaluating a movie). First, technique(s), including recording, designing and directoring (theo em duoc biet, director la noun, con dong tu la "to direct"===> direcTING, chu con direcTORING thi em chang thay co o dau ca, hay la no la tu moi duoc dua vao tu dien nen em khong biet????), are perfect ( em xin lỗi chứ em thấy chúng nó làm dở hơi bỏ xừ ). The senses are very magnificent and the actors are very good looking and fashionable (IMHO, "fashionable" is OK but it seems "trendy" is more appropriate???). (câu này nghe cứ nhộn nhộn sao ý ạ. Em mà sửa thì sửa thành: The movies usually carry/bring up ''''magnificent'''' emotions and the actors and actresses are often times (theo em duoc biet, OFTENTIMES la viet lien, chu khong co space o giua.)very good-looking and fashionable)Secondly, (em nghĩ nên bỏ I have to say đi, trong một bài luận mà cho I have to say vào nghe nó cải lương lắm) it is absolutely a waste of time to watch those movies because they repeat the same story over and over. It is usually a love story between a pretty girl and a handsome guy. They exprience obsstacles , which alwayscome from their families or their friends. However, in the end, after overcoming all hardship (re-arrange it so it looks neat and organized, without so many commas! ===> After overcoming all hardship, however, they eventually get married and lead/live a happy life), they get married to each other (bo cai to each other la du nghia roi! Be concise and short! ) and live a happy life. A ridiculous thing about Korean serial movies is the main character often died (==> dies, just present simple) at the end of the movie( hê hê, em thêm đoạn này vào cho vui, các bác đừng giận nhé ) Personally, I think Vietnamese serial movies are much better than those korean ones Is there anyone who want to (hì, chỗ này em nghĩ dùng oppose nghe chối lắm dưng mà chưa nghĩ ra từ gì, em lại sắp phải vào lớp rồi. Các bác nghĩ sao ạ?) oppose me ? BE YOUR SELF AS THOSE WHO MATTER DONT CARE AND THOSE WHO CARE DONT MATTER

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