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Whirlwind of Fate.

Chủ đề trong 'Anh (English Club)' bởi Sil, 16/08/2003.

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  1. britneybritney

    britneybritney Thành viên rất tích cực

    Tham gia ngày:
    08/05/2002
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    Hey Sil, I thought this is end already You know what, I always like this kind of story, I mean a happy ending at last. There''re loads of moving stories but the couples are never able to live together in the long run, they all die just like in Romeo and Juliet Hmmmmmmmz, reading your work of fanfiction is fun, really. I have to admit that I usually give up in the middle of the story cause reading on the computer really hurts my eyes, but I couldn''t help opening your topic and read it attentively. Your writing skill must be superb at the moment since you can do such a great job a couple of years ago.... How long have you been abroad? I guess it must be quite a long time huh. Maybe I just wasted my time thinking who you are since I didn''t use to be an open person a few years ago and I paid no attention to strange people I''d love to meet you when you''re back to Vietnam, though. Iâ?Td be my honor
    So close no matter how far... I have you in my heart and nothing else matters... :x
  2. 1ThuyNgoc9

    1ThuyNgoc9 Thành viên mới

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    30/05/2003
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    Okie, me, too. Iâ?Tm longing to see you so much, Sil â?~cause i find you such a special and mysterious girl. Actually, itâ?Ts not always easy for me to talk, no, actually, to say my soul to strangers. However, you are such a thoughtful and reliable girl that i know i can believe in you, can tell you whatever puzzles me, interests me, or please me. Yes, of course, even something that i cannot talk to my boyfriend or others. 8: )
    Like britneybritney, iâ?Tm addicted to your writing and replies. Everyday i cannot keep myself from logging on the forum and openning English box to see your post and to enjoy your writing. I like such romantic thingies so much and i even hope to write such some day myself. Anyway, it is really really difficult, i know. What about other stories? Have you finished them and are you going to post something even more interesting here?
    It's nice to be important, but it's more important to be nice...
  3. Sil

    Sil Thành viên mới

    Tham gia ngày:
    07/06/2003
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    The story finally comes to an end. Thank you so much for all of your support as well as your time and effort to read my silly piece of fiction. =)
    I really truly do appreciate it all very much.
    I hope to be able to continue in the not-so-far future with more fanfiction. Mayhaps, I''ll start posting a new piece next week. =) Right now internet access to me is as scarce as water in the desert --;;..so I have to slow it down a little.
    Comments are appreciated as always, and it''s even lovelier to know that people enjoy reading your works.
    With much appreciation and love,
    Sil. =)

    Doi la bien kho..
  4. TomezCao

    TomezCao Thành viên mới

    Tham gia ngày:
    16/09/2003
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    Hey, ... bomb here. Maybe my review seems to be late now cause as I see this topic have been leaving uncultivated for long time. But better late than never, hehe (foolish words).
    First of all, I wanna praise admiringly to your works, Sil. Actually, your style and interesting episode created cause me take a look at a new literatural genre - fanfic - but fanfic with anternate reality.. ac ac. I must reveal that it''s the first time I read an story ( I mean romantic story) from the begining to the end. That''s your succeed since you''ve attracted not few people foolish at literature as me have to read your writing. (hope those not magic word or puppy look ... )
    You know, your style reminds me of my English teacher who made impression deeply on me during university time and of course till now. Sorry she is not pretty lady (Miss - under average) as well as not miserible as Visual Literature teacher in your story but no one can not to admit her capality ( I mean knowledge). I used to be not like learning English but she changed me through her style ( f..cking method, way of enuncition,... especially her f..cking wink at us when she began to talk an English funny story) I meant f...cking method cause she alway punish lazy students the ones cannot reply her f...ing questions standing at seat till finding out responds. Most of her lectures I was punished by that way since I did not know why I could not find the answer when I faced her ( some times I could but I liked to be funished like that so that I could see her more visually). Sometimes my friends asked me what the f..k was in your head to act like that, man why did you change to other''s lectures. You stupid, I thought by myself, I fell in love to her. Well, maybe I had emotion with her since she gave me something really strange (mesmerising style) not as usual as another I knew.
    Sil, you''re also that (uncanny coicidence), you also give me unusual feelings through your writing. You now, after reading yours last night I had a sweet dream (it was true dream). You was in role of Juliet, I Romeo. You holding tumble books in arms bumped into me. Stared at me in silence.
    "What, speechless, I''''m too charming aren''''t I?" I asked. Ofcouse you calmly replied.
    "No, my love, I was just looking at something you got stuck
    between your teeth"
    I laughed but my laugh was not as rich and smooth as Romeo''s in the story.
    "And you''''re wondering why I didn''''t share it with you
    sweetheart?" I said as I was leading role in your story.
    And the dream went on and on and on as what you wrote until awaked by my friend: "Get up man, we are clean out of bread"
    Hey hèy hey, you know where I am in my sweet dream. I''m kissing my Juliet.
    Damn it! Maybe I fell in love again. But why and to whom I pour out my confidence here. Only God know ...
    ... and one person Sil, you also know why and to whom since surely you know I''m falling in love to you. (All you know this sentence lighten my soul when I utter here)
    ******
    With God e'rything is possible.
    But I'm not the God so sometimes I feel that life is hard than we die...
  5. Sil

    Sil Thành viên mới

    Tham gia ngày:
    07/06/2003
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    Thank you for your kind comment, it seems the thread has been dug out freshly from the graveyard. Somehow though, your words have awoken me and made me realise that I should be revising this fic, or start writing again. God knows how long I haven''t written..what..? At least a year?
    I do have a fic in mind..more of an original piece, rather than a fanfiction, however, could be a little -sensual- for somes'' tastes, *shrugs* I''m just happy I''ll be writing again. =) It is only with writing, that I am free. Speaking of which, congratulates me, for my English score, I topped overall in my state =)) and received a score of 98.9%, with my English essay on the topic of "My home - Hanoi". I cannot tell you how happy I am, that such topic has topped the state, and is being sent to a national writing competition. And with that wondrous encouragement in mind, I am revising my 15-16 diary, and sending it to a publisher. Not that anyone wants to read my stupid diary, but a few friends of mine have read it during their free time and have enjoyed it very much. They encouraged me to send it to a publisher, like "Briget Jone''s Diary" I suppose. =))))
    Seriously, my ego is all the way to another galaxy already ^^ *chuckles*
    And more of a personal note to a very dear reader, whom it seems, feels the most out of this strange crappy story I wrote. Good luck to you, my dear friend, and your love, your feelings, and everything else. All the memories that we''ve had at one point in our lives, will forever be alive and carried on with us, the flame never dies. Dream, forever, don''t ever stop dreaming of Juliet..
    I bid you all farewell for a short period of time, to say that I am coming to Hanoi soon, and hopefully will meet all of you wonderful people soon. =)))
    "Gomen nasai....demo..A****erui Sayuri-san.."
  6. TomezCao

    TomezCao Thành viên mới

    Tham gia ngày:
    16/09/2003
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    Congratulation on what you have just got that we''re sure in order to get it you definitely have been undergoing not few of deficulties and exerting yourself to the utmost. Continue trying your best to get the better of the best.
    For me, I also continue to come up with my dreams of Juliet. Hope that not as usual my dream will come true....
    Marry Christmas and Happy New Year!
    *****
    With God e'rything is possible.
    But I'm not the God so sometimes I feel that life is hard than we die...

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