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  1. chipchip_pth

    chipchip_pth Thành viên mới

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    i have 2 questions:
    1. show me some disavantages of tourism
    2. compare the education in england with the one in Vietnam.
    Please help me as soon as possible. Thanks a lot.
  2. lp4me

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    You asked :show me some disadvantages of tourism... But I think theres juz a small points to show.
    I think tourism is a good way to improve countries (Advantage), when they want the tourists come to their coutry, they must make the countries better to attract the tourism. But they spent much of money on tourism every years, and tourism isnot a branch that producted. If only they spent money on tourism, and didnot care bout any other branch, then the economies wont be improved...
    The second question: compare the education in england with the one in Vietnam.
    You could see many many bad things in the Vietnamese Edu. The "Under table money" is the worst thing in this. Most of the universities now had that... Juz like: If you wanna have a good mark, but you cant do well on that subject, so, juz come to the teacher''s and give them some money, you will have what you want. It depends on your qualtity of money... And many things you could see in our Edu... But remember to compare with the English Edu, I dont know much bout that...So let try urself, or someone will help you...Good luck!
  3. chipchip_pth

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    thanks for helping me but you see, what i am asking you is topics of my essays. so you have to point one, two or three general ideas supporting the main idea. If you give me such specific ideas, its very difficult for me to have supporting sentences.
    please contact me. you''re welcome.
  4. White_n_Cold_new

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    u should work out the supporting ideas of your essay base on the ideas they give. they just can''t do it for you, it''s your task
  5. lp4me

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    I wanted to help ta much, but I think youd better to think about your questions byyourself. Maybe you can see it everywhere on your way. Juz see and try it! Good luck, mate!
  6. meo_sieu_ngoc

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    Ah.... hm... I know I''m not as good as all of you, but I think I could do some thing.. U know.... just... ah... hmm..... I''m so shy........hope that U won''t laugh at me.... although I know I''m so bad compared with U all.....
    ah... hmm... about the first essay.... it''s on ... " Disavantages of tourism " right? ... or some thing like that..... oh how bad my memory is ! ...
    - Pollution : tourists drop trash ( I ''m not sure about this word.... is it... " gabages " or something like that... ? ) . That''s also the reason why many villages become polluted after some one find it a good place for tourism. --> as a result , wild animals are disappearing day by day.... -----> ''cause tourists kill and eat them ! .
    - Social evil : many tourists -> many hotels are built --> many..... garden cafe ( cafe vu*`o*`n ) ---> many many other ..social evil <-- I think U''ll know what are they .
    - Destroying the national hertigtage : hmm...when tourists come to an other country , for example, when foreigners come to VN , they..... kiss their darlings... in the road... ---> Vietnamese youth become ...... more opened in love ( there is a mistake here I think ! )
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    About the second one... ah.. hm.. what is it on ?..ah. hmm....I"ve forgoten it ! ..May be I''ll tell you more in my next.... next.... next..... ( I dunno how to call it ).. bai`
  7. Iced_Earth_Mgimo

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    I''m afraid to say some of U have made lots of grammatical mistakes. For instance, "the one" in "compare the education in england with the one in Vietnam" should''ve been replaced by ''that". The first reply by lp4me is packed with mistakes . Havin'' no wish to upset U,I just wanna call on U to be more accurate. U won''t get frustrated,will ya?
    Some outlines on the disadvantages of tourism,to my mind, are as follows:
    1. Alongside with some positive cultural aspects that tourism contributes to a country (broadening communication and understanding between the host country and foreigners, promoting their friendship and cooperation in various spheres...), inadequate alien moral values, lifestyles, manners of behavior can be spread by foreign tourists (debauchery,materialism...).
    2. The public security and local law may find themselves at risk by actions of those foreigners who don''t understand or intentionally violate them as if it were their privilege.
    3. Social evils (as meo_sieu_ngoc suggested) are likely to take their shape to satisfy the demand of part of foreign tourists ( prostitution, drug abuse...)
    4. The amortisation of the country''s heritages when they''re used in an overly way.
    I dunno much about the British educational system, sorry!

    Luck!
  8. chipchip_pth

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    i always want to have someone show my mistakes, so it''s very happy when you did that. Thanks for all what you have done for me.
  9. chipchip_pth

    chipchip_pth Thành viên mới

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    i see what you mean and i know it''s my task. I could write everything, anything in english if i had ideas. But i couldn''t think of or find out general ideas, so i couldn''t support. and sometimes some points that i found are not enough for an essay or others have better ideas. Thus it''s a reason why i need your help. Are you ready to help me?
  10. Manh_Ha_new

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    This is the best way to write the essay I have ever seen.

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