who can answer my question?

Glad to help U,as English is my passion.
As U know,writing an essay is not very easy,but nothing''s impossible.First,gotta figure out general ideas that can disclose the nature of the issue.This is the most important stage U''re to cope with.It depends on ur overall social knowledge concerning various spheres of daily life and ur specific understanding of a certain field required.
Now comes the second stage: put forward detailed ideas,argument *****pport ur general outlines,including pros n cons,advantages n disadvantages,virtues n shortcomings.Nobody can do it for U,that is to say U''ve gotta have a deep insight into different matters,and then various skills like analyzin'', synthesizin''...
The last step is to convert this frame into a full essay which has 3 parts: introduction,main body and conclusion. The introduction n conclusion are pretty easy: the former involves a short presentation of the issue (what it is,its importance and topicality..),the latter deals with what U can conclude after analyzin'' the matter,its significance (once again)... On the whole,writing an essay in English is not so much different from that in Vietnamese.
To be honest,I''m not the one who''s read lots of books guiding methods of writing essays,paragraphs... in English.What i''ve got is the experience I''ve enjoyed in studyin'' Vietnamese literature and handlin'' compositions in Vietnamese. This,to my mind,is the most reliable basis for U to achieve any success in writin'' essays in other languages,not only in English. Of course, each of us has different ways of studyin''. U should,in the long run and for ur sake, find out ur own way to follow.]
I''d be very glad if my experience was somewhat helpful for U.
What''s more,I''m studyin'' in Russia, not an English-speakin'' country,but whether we can obtain achievements or not depends on ourselves. And,I wanna emphasize the special role of PASSION in it.U''ve gotta have a strong liking for English itself if U wish to master it.Nobody can force U to become proficient in English if U''re allergic to it.
By the way,If ya need smt apart from this all, U can get in contact with me in Yahoo!Messenger. My nick: annihilator8683.
With regards!

Thank u Iced_Earth_Mgimo
I always make mistake. But I dont care bout it, juz so crazy with me to learn mỏe bout gramma ....though that, I feel so happy when u read my words, and give me great Ideas...Thanx

lol lol lol!!!!!!!!!!
writing an essay is not very easy??? so u mean ''easy''??? lol
U''''ve gotta ????<------ wtf iz diz? lol
''read lots of books guiding methods of writing essays,paragraphs... in English'' oh for reel??? but u undastand ''em all? cuz da i see no ''method'' in ur linez.
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dats was aight thou , lol, u''r funny, hella funny dawg, U gotta bring diz stuff to...uhm... comic view, u knoe i mean, u''ve made me laugh as hell, lol!!!!

Sorry cho tui trả lời bằng tiếng Việt
- Về disavantages của tourism thì có thể bàn đến các ý như 1/ảnh hưởng đến môi trường(rác thải, sinh thái...) 2/xáo trộn đến đời sống địa phương và/hoặc thay đôi các truyền thống 3/khó kiểm soát dịch bệnh (vụ Sars và một ví dụ) 4/du nhập lối sống khác biệt...... (nhưng tốt hơn hết vẫn đề cao những lợi ích của du lịch đem lại được)
- Về so sánh (sự khâc biệt) giữa nền giáo dục của Anh với VN thì có thể tìm hiều thêm thông quâ sự khác biệt về hệ thống giáo dục (phân chia lớp/cấp), các môn học ở trường, vai trò của giáo dục tư nhân/nhà nước, vị trí, vai trò của người thầy/người trò trong lớp học, cơ sở vật chất hay điều kiện học tập... những vấn đề (tiêu cực) khác không nên đề cập đến, vì đây thuộc về ý kiến cá nhân, nếu không đưa được vào bài viết evidence cụ thể thì không nên nói. Tư liệu thì có thể tìm trong cuốn British Culture sách giáo trình của SV tiếng Anh năm 2.3 gì đấy có nói rất rõ.

I''m agree with meo_sieu_ngoc. I like ur answer

chipchip_pth
,VietnamThành viên từ 02:17, 19/09/04Chưa có ai bình chọn    Quản lý thành viên
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thanks to your help, i have finished my essay but i couldn''''t limit it within 250-300 words. Do you think "advantages and disavantages of tourism"is so long topic to be written in such number of words?

Gửi lúc 09:25, 28/09/04

lp4me
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,VietnamThành viên từ 15:53, 23/09/04Chưa có ai bình chọn    Quản lý thành viên

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Did you choose that Topic as your work?...Why didnot you choose another..Many interesting topics you could choose...But if you chose it, you should try to complete it well...Good lux to ya!

Gửi lúc 15:14, 28/09/04

Thanks,onelarge. "U''ve gotta" is not correct, just "U gotta" is enuf.
But,apart from that,U should''ve looked over what U wanna remark on more carefully. Gotta be sure what''s wrong to criticize!
Laughin'' out louderrrrrrrr!

oh so ya thangz were aight? lol, nigga, funny as hell thou lol!!

Show to chichip some of my surface opinions
1. Disadvatages of Vietnam tourism:
- Vietnam tourism industry couldnt build relationships and cooperation among tousim operators ==> cohesiveness is low. Look at many other countries which have developed their tourism industries. They just advertise their tourism as unique communities on over the world. But what about Vietnam? Vietnam advertises its tourism by individual tourism businesses among the country.
-Infrastructure is not good. I think U dont need any explannation about this point. It is clear to see that, rite?
-Investment into tourism doesnt work effectively
-Tourists come to Vietnam as Vietnam is one of not many countries which are old and historic. That makes Vietnam attractive in the eyes of tourists. But Vietnam seems to develop its tourism in another direction.
-Services are not good
-Also, the tourism industry is connected to many other industries. Those industries havent been cooperating effectively for recent time
2. UK Education VS Vietnamese Education: I think there have been many articles disucss about that, then it''''s not difficult for chipchip to find and work out his/her own supporting statements.
Just some of opinions. Hope them help. Good luck !
Thuymp
Được thuymp sửa chữa / chuyển vào 15:49 ngày 30/09/2004

ONELARGE, take a look and think it over,specially for U:
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don''t bring yourself down cos it just don''t figure
take a look at yourself and your history
you look like a godd..n nigger to me
it''s a negative word and the white man made it
gave you a name to dominate and trade it
making blood money of his very own race man
and all of this because the colour of your face man
Nigger, Nigger, Nigger, Nigger
placed and educated in a neighbourhood of crime
taught from the beginning that you weren''t worth time
liquor store and gun store next to one another
with only one purpose so you all kill each other
leaving one less problem to worry about
that''s the way they do it this is how it turns out
Nigger, Nigger, Nigger, Nigger
Nigger You''re a real nigger, You''re a real nigger
You''re a real nigger, You''re a real nigger
U,go to hell when U judge another person by the colour of their skin
there ain''t such a thing called superior race
and there ain''t nothing special ''bout the colour of your face
hypocritical hype is your only contribution
so leave us alone and give your brothers some space
cos you''re a lousy contribution to the human race
Nigger, Nigger, ....
And p..s off with ur street language,ONELARGE!