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Why don't we write essays and have correction right here?

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  1. alooooooo123

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    Seemingly there would have been a long and wide road thrown out since I''ve dropped my recent thought. Talking about those Hilary and McCain and Obama, surely I have not much information over that story. I guess, under any circumstances might one of those guys above reach the hill of the King, we Vietnamese guys should have those thought in mind: United States is nothing but an empire, exactly, she is the biggest. So no matter what she does, no matter what she did, no matter what she will do, those small gals would easily be affected though. That''s a story that we could talk about night after night, and I can not refuse my feel for her neither. So, we gonna return to this story later for I don''t think it could be expanded to a kind of war or something what might deserved to be worried about.
    Returning to the topic check and be checked and the things related , surely I did not put at this much hopes over that speculation. Really I didn''t know yet what might be going on with this writing thread ahead, but I''m so glad having you guyskhongbietgi and Chapi to talk to and share some point of view with
    Well, the IELTS topic is what I am owning you Chapi today then tomorrow would be a nice and suitable chance for me to pay out. See you later and have a nice nite.
  2. vanvvacb

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    Hi
    I am very interested in this topic, but now I am busy with my work (I am being at office).
    Next time, I will joint with you
    Best regards.
    P/s: my email is vanvv@acb.com.vn
  3. alooooooo123

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    Hi buddies!!
    I''ve just been about home for several seconds. And I''m wondering if maybe am I interested in showing either of you two (oh three) a good essay to keep up with you men. Well, it gonna take some time and it might be the only way to get sleepy wish off my mind at this moment. Firstly, I am going to sleep right now and, and on the second thought, I''m not going to buzzing you. Just come by and say hi and wish those ladies around a happy today. Dudes, even whatever I say may sound worthless, and you may see, surely it cost nothing.
    Don''t be fooled by what I said. I''m just kidding.
    to Chapi: essay late. sori, buddy.
  4. Chapi2007

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    I''d like to correct-it-myself, as followed:
    Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should read only those books that are about real events, real people, and established facts. Use specific reasons and details *****pport your opinion.
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    Those books with real events, people and established facts are of course having greater advantages on readers. However, saying that the others are not deserve to be paid attention is somehow pretty strict. Those ones with unrealities are, in many cases, still greatly meaningful, not only for the sake of recreation but also even for life application.
    First of all, as we all know that the value of books depends on each theme the authors set out to solve. Readers will know how to choose the ones which are suitable with their particular demands and interests; for example time-killing, career guide, illness treatment or just friend-making manual. The better demand-meeting solutions a book provides, the more seller it can be. Therefore, it is all about the arts of the author?Ts story- development and writing.
    Nevertheless, if real- life examples of events, people and facts are built *****pport the author?Ts main findings or arguments, the book contents will be more persuasive, for sure. A real Rockerfeller?Ts story in Dale Carnegiê?Ts success-teaching book tells its readers much more than anything else. People naturally tend to believe in what have already happened, noted and widely accepted. Yet, is it quite necessary all the time? Probably, not. The fact is that authors are neither able nor compulsory to know everything; though, they should certainly tell us what they come to know as more accruate as possible. But, their task of fulfilling their stories and solving what they have set out to communicate to readers is utmost significant. At the end of the day, what the readers are satisfied with the book is what he is benefited from it and to what extent his expectations are met by the author''s development and writing. For this purpose, unreal events, fake persons, invented facts could be mobilized as far as they support the author?Ts main themes and are less odd-looking enough for not to raise the reader?T skepticism.
    Moreover, ones must agree that there are often different explanations or arguments over the same events. Evenmore, there are quite not a few cases that the real ones are still subject to the world?Ts doubts; meanwhile, such thing like ghosts are unreal but horror books and films are still welcomed? Believing them is the rights of people and in this topic, the readers. Eventually, it can wisely states that events, people and facts though being real or not are only tools for authors to attain the communication objectives. No matter what means they use, it is their abilities in developing the stories and the contents they intend to convey, the most concerned things for readers when choosing what to read and trust.
    In conclusion, the real stuff in a book is a clear plus for the readers to take it from shelves. However, it should not be prerequisite con***ions for us to look for a good book. Because, we should first look inside to understand what benefits we are really looking for by the readings other than to what extents those stories there are true or not; secondly, keep in mind that the book quality is also and much more resting upon the writer?Ts talents.
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    Note: @ alooo123: I made it in much more than 30 mins.
    Later, should we set the time as well?
  5. moon_light_81

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    @ Chappy: Let me answer your question by quoting the below letter that the US former president Abraham Lincoln wrote to his son''s teacher. I will borrow his letter for my children in the future and guide them reading books with real events and stories to become scholars but not forget reading books with beautiful tales to become loved persons with life philosophy, belief, and dreams.
    And here it is, the letter of Abraham Lincoln sent to his son''s teacher:
    He will have to learn, I know,
    that all men are not just,
    all men are not true.
    But teach him also that
    for every scoundrel there is a hero;
    that for every selfish Politician,
    there is a dedicated leader...
    Teach him for every enemy there is a friend,
    Steer him away from envy,
    if you can,
    teach him the secret of
    quiet laughter.
    Let him learn early that
    the bullies are the easiest to lick...
    Teach him, if you can,
    the wonder of books...
    But also give him quiet time
    to ponder the eternal mystery of birds in the sky,
    bees in the sun,
    and the flowers on a green hillside.
    In the school teach him
    it is far honourable to fail
    than to cheat...
    Teach him to have faith
    in his own ideas,
    even if everyone tells him
    they are wrong...
    Teach him to be gentle
    with gentle people,
    and tough with the tough.
    Try to give my son
    the strength not to follow the crowd
    when everyone is getting on the band wagon...
    Teach him to listen to all men...
    but teach him also to filter
    all he hears on a screen of truth,
    and take only the good
    that comes through.
    Teach him if you can,
    how to laugh when he is sad...
    Teach him there is no shame in tears,
    Teach him to scoff at cynics
    and to beware of too much sweetness...
    Teach him to sell his brawn
    and brain to the highest bidders
    but never to put a price-tag
    on his heart and soul.
    Teach him to close his ears
    to a howling mob
    and to stand and fight
    if he thinks he''s right.
    Treat him gently,
    but do not cuddle him,
    because only the test
    of fire makes fine steel.
    Let him have the courage
    to be impatient...
    let him have the patience to be brave.
    Teach him always
    to have sublime faith in himself,
    because then he will have
    sublime faith in mankind.
    This is a big order,
    but see what you can do...
    He is such a fine fellow,
    my son!
  6. Chapi2007

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    Thank you, mon_light_81!
    The poem''s really great.
  7. alooooooo123

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    Hi friends,
    Just come by and say hi. Time full of messy things
    How your days, Chapi ?
    Have time for a cafe some time ?
  8. Chapi2007

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    Hi alo123,
    I''m fine, but quite busy, too.
    No time for coffee!
    Just tea
    But you know, since they add pesticide in our green tea (promotion), I become black tea fan.
    Hey, how about you?
  9. moon_light_81

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    Advice for you: dont drink black tea so much as it contains more caffeine than green tea, which may make you lack of sleep, get anxiety, or even darkening your teeth. Instead of using sugar as usual, put some honey into your tea then surely you will have a unique flavor to enjoy
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