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Why don't we write essays and have correction right here?

Chủ đề trong 'Anh (English Club)' bởi Chapi2007, 02/03/2008.

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  1. alooooooo123

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    I love to.
    ???????????
    Have a nice night, friends.
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    Wat was that ? Trà mạn ???
    <BLOCKQUOTE id=quote><font size=1 face="Arial" id=quote>Trích từ:... even darkening your teeth[/QUOTE]
    I love to.
    <BLOCKQUOTE id=quote><font size=1 face="Arial" id=quote>Trích từ:Instead of using sugar as usual [/QUOTE]
    ???????????
    Have a nice night, friends.
    [/QUOTE]
    "Tra man" is unflavored green tea. Drinking tea and looking at its color, you can differentiate between black tea and green tea. Green tea does not mean fresh tea only. It is also kind of dry tea while black tea must be dried and fermented.
    I dont no if you usually put some sugar in your tea as some others do but if you do, then why dont you refresh your taste with some bee honey instead. It must be pleasingly different, you bet.
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    I''''d like to correct-it-myself, as followed: ---> as follows bác ạ
    Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should read only those books that are about real events, real people, and established facts. Use specific reasons and details *****pport your opinion.
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    Those books with real events, people and established facts are of course having greater advantages on readers. However, saying that the others are not deserve to be paid attention is somehow pretty strict. Those ones with unrealities are, in many cases, still greatly meaningful, not only for the sake of recreation but also even for life application.
    First of all, as we all know that the value of books depends on each theme the authors set out to solve. Readers will know how to choose the ones which are suitable with their particular demands and interests; for example time-killing, career guide, illness treatment or just friend-making manual. The better demand-meeting solutions a book provides, the more seller it can be. Therefore, it is all about the arts of the author?Ts story- development and writing.
    ---> đoạn này hình như không liên quan đến topic gì cả bác ạ.
    Nevertheless, if real- life examples of events, people and facts are built *****pport the author?Ts main findings or arguments, the book contents will be more persuasive, for sure. A real Rockerfeller?Ts story in Dale Carnegie?Ts success-teaching book tells its readers much more than anything else. People naturally tend to believe in what have already happened, noted and widely accepted. Yet, is it quite necessary all the time? Probably, not. The fact is that authors are neither able nor compulsory to know everything; though, they should certainly tell us what they come to know as more accruate as possible. But, their task of fulfilling their stories and solving what they have set out to communicate to readers is utmost significant. At the end of the day, what the readers are satisfied with the book is what he is benefited from it and to what extent his expectations are met by the author''''s development and writing. For this purpose, unreal events, fake persons, invented facts could be mobilized as far as they support the author?Ts main themes and are less odd-looking enough for not to raise the reader?T skepticism.
    Moreover, ones must agree that there are often different explanations or arguments over the same events. Evenmore, there are quite not a few cases that the real ones are still subject to the world?Ts doubts; meanwhile, such thing like ghosts are unreal but horror books and films are still welcomed? Believing them is the rights of people and in this topic, the readers. Eventually, it can wisely states that events, people and facts though being real or not are only tools for authors to attain the communication objectives. No matter what means they use, it is their abilities in developing the stories and the contents they intend to convey, the most concerned things for readers when choosing what to read and trust.
    In conclusion, the real stuff in a book is a clear plus for the readers to take it from shelves. However, it should not be prerequisite con***ions for us to look for a good book. Because, we should first look inside to understand what benefits we are really looking for by the readings other than to what extents those stories there are true or not; secondly, keep in mind that the book quality is also and much more resting upon the writer?Ts talents. --->câu này ko liên quan gì đến topic thì phải?
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    Không biết tại em đang stress hay làm sao mà đọc bài bác lên em thấy các ý đưa ra ko đúng trọng tâm topic cho lắm, ví dụ chưa rõ ràng (hay tại em đang dở hơi nên thế nhỉ???). Từ ngữ bác dùng một số chỗ ko sound natural và hơi informal. Em chỉ có một số thiển ý thế thôi. Thỉnh thoảng vẫn vào topic của các bác để hóng nhưng dạo này lười quá ko viết được bài essay nào cả. Đã dốt lại càng dốt hơn
    Bác cứ vừa học mấy kĩ năng khác, vừa viết đi. Không phải bài viết nào cũng được sửa cả nhưng học hành là cả quá trình dài bác nhỉ, không thể ngày một ngày hai mà giỏi luôn được. Có công mài sắt, có ngày nên kim. Chúc bác sớm thành công
  4. alooooooo123

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    Well, hi friends!
    Something has been delayed for years, that''s my essay, hì
    So-rì buddies that I have left that kind of task somewhere in the midst of my priority list which is a bit not so easy for me to pick it out.
    Then, it''s time to do payment stuff. Take the chance

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