write about your youth time

Hello everybody love E...how are you today???My E is not good but I like it too much....please dont' laugh me and if you don't mind , can you correct any of my mistake in E? Thanks..
When you grown, you'll miss your youth time...that time is too fun for me to forget
Now..Let's tell everybody our youth time ...I start
13 years ago..... when I was three, the first I went to the Madonna church.....I saw Madonna hold the Earth, I thought that she hold a coconut
and.......
I wanted to become a teacher when i was six.I always play with my friends in my garden and i only wanted to be a teacher and all my friends must be my pupils. If they didn't agree with me i wouldn't play together...

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My friend, your English grammar may be bad, that's understandable and we can work together to give it some improvement. But because you write in English cannot justify the fact that your writing doesn't make any sense at all. Look at your own writing. I dont blame you for the numerous gramatical mistakes. But even after all possible corrections were made, the writing would still sound like a piece written by some kindergartener. Who would want to spend time on such a waste?
I'm not laughing at or looking down on you or anything. Just a piece of advice I think might be helpful, not only for you but for some other members of the club.
...WISEST IS HE WHO KNOWS HE DOESN'T KNOW...

oh la la....thanks..... I corrected. ,
Hello everybody loves E...how are you today???My E is not good enough....please dont' laugh me and if you don't mind , can you correct any of my mistake ? Thanks..
When you grown, you'll miss your childhood...that time is hard to forget because i had so much fun
Now..Let's me tell everybody about my childhood ...I start
13 years ago..... when I was three, the first time, I went to the Madonna church.....I saw Madonna holding the Earth, I thought that she hold a coconut
and.......
At six years old...i wanted to become a teacher. I always play with my friends in my garden. I only wanted to be a teacher and all my friends must be my pupils. If they didn't agree with me i wouldn't play together...

( wrong or right???)
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LoveI3ug , by all means, do continue . Just ignore the perfectionist Chicken Feather who likes to grill people on grammar . Chicken Feather, remember that no one else is as strict as you in this club . Just relax once in a while, sit back and relax. Sometimes you can see amazing things in this box.

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hehhe, if you ever read my essay I wrote in the 12th grade, you all will laugh to death because of some silly or even stupid mistakes.
actually, back to that time, i didnt even know what essay means, lol. And all I expected was the average of 6,0 in English at the end of the term.
Lovel3bug, to me, you are very brave, brave enough to post your essay here even it contains some gramatical mistakes, so what ? people will see your mistakes and correct them for you, you're going to benefit a lot from this. If you keep it for yourself, you'll be forever blind.
You have done what I should have done but I couldn't, sigh
anyway, good luck with your English study.
Bác Long tũn, hehe, dạo này em với bác có duyên nhể
and what do you mean by a waste ? look back like 5 or 6 years ago, how was your English then ? she's still young and ambitious, plz dont discourage her. And next time, plz look at the mirror before you criticize others

Giờ em mong manh như khói
Giờ ta nắng đã chiều rồi
Tình xưa giờ như chiếc lá
Bay đi phương nào, tan tác muôn nơi..........

Hey little girl, please don't get angry with Longatum, he just want you get better in writing English.
"....I went to [no the] Madona Church, and I saw a picture of Madona was holding the Earth..."
Reading your sentence, I think that you met singer Madona who was standing somewhere and holding the...

That's the Cathedral in SG.
The Notre Dame in Paris
Our Lady of Peace church in Santa Clara
Our Lady of Guadalupe in San Jose.
I never see any "Madonna church" any where .
Rock star "Madonna"
Soccer player Maradona

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2 entries found for Madonna.
To select an entry, click on it. (Click 'Go' if nothing happens.)
MadonnaMadonna lily
Main Entry: Ma?ãdon?ãna
Pronunciation: m&-'d?Ô-n&
Function: noun
Etymology: Italian, from Old Italian ma donna, literally, my lady
Date: 1584
1 archaic : LADY -- used as a form of respectful address
2 obsolete : an Italian lady
3 a : VIRGIN MARY b : an artistic depiction (as a painting or statue) of the Virgin Mary

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Thưa các bác, các bác lại không đọc kỹ bài em viết rồi, hoặc là em viết ngu quá nên các bác đọc hiểu nhầm ý. Mịa, em đâu có kêu gì về ngữ pháp của bạn Uyên gì đâu... Ý em bảo là: tiếng Anh không giỏi là một chuyện, nhưng bài viết phải có lấy cái nội dung cho ra hồn chứ. Các bác đọc thử bài bạn ý viết xem xem nó có nội dung gì trong cả tiếng Việt lẫn tiếng Anh không? cái này em khuyên cho bạn ý tốt thôi. Học tiếng ANh, ngoài việc để đọc sách tiếng Anh và hiểu, tóm đi tóm lại cũng với mục đích là để trình bầy ý kiến bằng một thứ tiếng khác ngoài tiếng mẹ đẻ. Bạn ý có học ngữ pháp bằng giời, thi TOEFL 670 mà không viết lấy nổi một bài viết cho nó có nội dung thì cũng không thể gọi là giỏi được.
Bác hhv thử nghĩ xem, ở nhà, nếu học Tập làm văn, bác được ra để: "Viết về thời thơ ấu của đồng chí." thì bác sẽ viết thế nào??? Ngắn ngủn trơ trụi vài ba dòng, viết những câu vô nghĩa như "Hồi bé em đi nhà thờ Đức Bà, em thấy bà ý ôm cái quả địa cầu em lại tưởng bà ý ôm quả dừa... híhí..." à???
Em chỉ muốn tốt cho bạn Uyên thôi ạ, sự thực thì mất lòng. Thực sự em có chỉ trích gì bạn Uyên về tiếng ANh của bạn ý đâu.Các bác đèn giời soi xét ạ.
...WISEST IS HE WHO KNOWS HE DOESN'T KNOW...

oh dear....i'm sorry...i just want to know your childhood ...and i know my E is not good , so i want you correct any of my mistake in E....but you did not help me, longatum.......i think you censuring me .i'm 16 , so i haven't special tale for tell you ...
thank all, i don't angry
everybody...can you tell me about your special childhood????
and.....hello longatum...can we make friends????

hiihhi ko biết lần này có sai cái gì nữa ko nhĩ????
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