Writting your blog in English

Thank you for correcting my mistake. I hope we''ll help each other in writing English.

1. i ==> I
2. hourse ==> house

Although my English is not good, I try to find and correct some mistakes in your writing.
I think when you describe things happen in the past; form of verb is the past simple. Ex:
1) Yesterday WAS A teacher day or the Vietnamese educators?T day. Because VN is not only the country has a teacher day that why u can not write ?othe teacher day.?
2) it''''s terrible... --- > It WAS terrible.
Hourse------ > house.
Sains ---- > may be sand ?
it''''s still rain ----- > It was still raining
lood ---- > may be flooded
This problem make me ---- > This problem makes me
Goverment ---- > Government

writen ---- > is written
Welcome, I hope we''ll have many friends have the same favourite to write blog in English.

aobstudent, don''''''''t follow grammar rules so rigidly. "It was the first time smbody did smt" sounds alright to me. As you might already know, past simple has been replacing present perfect/past perfect in many cases, for the sake of simplicity. And to be completely grammatically correct, it should be "it was the first time I had ever seen..."
And your second correction: 2. should be "at those times"
My corrections:
Although I have been in Hanoi since I was a child, yesterday was the first time I saw a hail in Hanoi. It was raining heavily; someone has told me that she has seen hail five times. I remember that Hn has hailed several times but at those times I was not in Hn. Fortunately, I came back home (or I got home) 15 minutes before it started to rain. On some roads like Lang Ha crossroads many vehicles were stuck at that time. Well, a boring night, I had had some plans but heavy rain kept me from going out. Today, I had some exercises in English class but I did not do well that ''''s why I do not improve my English as far as I expect. Here was our question:
?oShould governments spend more money on improving roads and highways? Alternatively, should governments spend more money on improving public transportation? Why??
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I don''''''''t quite understand how "not improve ur English" is the result of "not doing exercises well". Vice-versa would make some sense, but not much. However, in that case, the clause would be: "that''''''''s because I hadn''''''''t improved..."
Please correct my corrections it would help me a lot.
Được fatblackchicken sửa chữa / chuyển vào 16:11 ngày 22/11/2006

Thank you for your instruction. Well, it is not easy to good at English, especially in writing. I ''ll care deeply about the tense in my sentence.

You know, sometimes, we hardly notify our mistakes which can be easily found by others.
See my comments below:
1. my friends and i
2. was
3. came into
4. the rain / its
5. it was still raining
6. makes
7. carry out
8. could (better to use "could")
Have all a nice day !

to day is my friend''s wedding. And iam so happy for them. this is their''s fist love. But i feel sad for me since I have broken with my boy friend. In fact i can''t believe it happened to me. We have fell in love for 2 years. i thought hewas the person i really wanted to marry. But now he has gone far from me he said that we have many different taste, different relations and so on . I also think that so I have to decide to breake with him and hope that both will have abetter life. But now i really find that it is difficult to forget him and i wish i could do that.

Today is my friend''s wedding. I''m so happy for them, because this is their first love. However, I feel sad for myself since I broke up with my boyfriend. In fact, I cannot believe it happens to me. We fell in love for 2 years and I thought he was the one I really wanted to marry. Now he has gone far away from me. He told me that we have so many different tastes, different relations and so onõ?Ư I also think thatõ?Ư Therefore, I have decided to break up with him and I hope both of us will have a better life. Although, I realize that it is difficult to forget him, and I wish I could forget him.
 
 

Em tham gia với ^^
http://360.yahoo.com/nup_hero ( mới viết đc 1 entries mà chỉ có 1 cái là viết, cái còn lại thì copy trên wikipedia )
Em thử xin phép nêu ý kiến nhớ: đc ko nếu chúng ta sẽ có 1 topic hàng tuần, và mọi người sẽ TỰ viết 1 essay về chủ đề đó?
Anyway, chúc mọi người 1 ngày vui vẻ !